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inspiredpoetwriter
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since 2002-01-05
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0 posted 2002-01-27 07:11 PM


January 26, 2002, 11:17 PM

I miss u my friend
I our childhood time
The fun and laughter.

I miss u dear friend
I miss been next to u
I miss the tender love
That brighten my day
Brings a smile to my face.

I miss u my friend
All the time we’ve spent
Together
I miss u our hearts
Ach of the time apart.

I miss u my friend
I miss u caring loving
Soul that’s always here that’s
Good to know
Special like the star
In my sky.

I miss you my friend
I miss the dreams of living
Together and partying
Till morning light.

I miss you my friend
Your always on my mind
I wish u were here with me.

I miss you my friend
I miss u
Calling you tonight made
Me feel better
But its just not the same.

I miss you my friend
I miss you
Rainbow is bright
Leading me farther in the
Land of friendship an d love.

I miss you my friend
I miss u
I love you
I care for u
I only want to see you
Right here.

¥¤¥¤¥¥¤¥¤¥iM a PoEt WhO wRiTeZ Wit HeR Heart ¥¤¥¤¥¥¤¥¤¥

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Jenabou
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since 2000-06-13
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1 posted 2002-01-27 07:28 PM


This was really good,I recently moved ,away from all my friends! so I know exactly how you feel
could really relate to this one
nice job!

*for someone who's used to heartache,losing it all was just a matter of time*
Be kind,for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle

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2 posted 2002-01-27 08:31 PM


There is a certain someone i miss the way you describe missing your friend...we've lived next door to eachother our entire life and were best friends up until about the middle of middle school and we just became night and day...so i understand...it brough back reminders of good and bad times and memories of what was and never will be again..thank u for the flashback

yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows

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3 posted 2002-01-31 10:17 AM


Aww, this is sad.  Lost relationships can be a very hard thing to cope with.  Especially if you tend to blame everything on yourself.  *grumble*  But what about talking to the person?  It's amazing how big a wall that loss of communication builds... and it's harder to build it than break it down.  Or maybe giving this poem to your friend?

Anywho, I really enjoyed this.  I hope everything turns out well   Good luck.

--Marie

I wish your fingers could touch all I can't say... no one should ever feel this alone.

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