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sad brown eyes
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since 2001-12-14
Posts 19
Connecticut U.S

0 posted 2002-01-25 01:09 PM


He says im the only one for him,noone else would fit in.
Then why do I feel like i got so much competition?\
All those other girls and the words i hear about them.
Shouldnt he only be with me?
You know loveing and touching me.
Instead i hear other girls names getting called or just hearing them talk.
Why dont he know that it hurts meso much inside to know that someone else is by his side.


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Chrissy
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since 2002-01-24
Posts 81
Idaho, no I am not a farmer!
1 posted 2002-01-25 05:22 PM


Well Hi there!
Maybe He needs to know how you feel, Try talking to him.  You need to have a certain amount of trust in a relationship, but along with that goes a huge amount of respect.  Talk to him, and tell him how you feel...and if he needs you to trust him, then you need him to respect you.  If that is not an option, then get uut, You can find many guys that will have that respect for you.  There are some "perfect" ones out there...Good luck to you.  

Chrissy

Jess_24
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since 2002-01-25
Posts 5
Boone,Arkansas
2 posted 2002-01-25 06:24 PM


Hey. That is so how I feel about my ex right now. All promises made were broken. No one seems to understand that it hurts me so much to see him moving on.
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3 posted 2002-01-26 11:35 PM


This describes my entire friday night...weird that i find this!!!!

yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows

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4 posted 2002-02-12 01:14 PM


y don't you just tell him how you feel?
communication is what keeps a relationship together you know
Thanks for sharing and keep em coming

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.


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5 posted 2002-02-12 01:33 PM


I sooooo know how you feel. Great poem.

                           Dawn

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