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Missthang
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since 2001-07-03

Posts 103

0 posted 2002-01-23 11:57 PM

Let me rot in a cold dark room.
Let me lay here and live in gloom.
Let me feel the world around.
Let me be alone down to the ground.
Let me stay right where I am.
Let me act the way I am.
Let me live without love.
Let me be the lonesome dove.
Let me feel just as I do.
Let me mope, not because of you.
Let me cry and don't you worry.
Let me be and don't you hurry.
Jab me stab me and let me die.
Do as I ask and don't ask why.

*Sometimes you just feel like rotting away and escaping everything and everyone.....including yourslef*

"Whatever you are doing, love yourslef for doing it.
Whatever you are feeling, love yourself for feeling it."
-Thaddeus Golas

DayDreamer99
Member

since 2002-01-23

Posts 72

1 posted 2002-01-24 02:36 PM

That was very good sometimes u do feel like gettin away from everyone including urself...
Tifferz

xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

2 posted 2002-01-27 12:10 PM

I've felt this way many times but unfortunately you cant escape yourself..

yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows

Marshalzu

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since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
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3 posted 2002-01-27 06:46 PM

I know what you feel about wanting to escape everything but in the end running away doesn't solve your problems. A wonderful read though and thank you for sharing it with us.

Zu

I wish I was a pigeon so that I could fly across the world

Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

4 posted 2002-01-31 10:12 AM

"Jab me stab me and let me die.
Do as I ask and don't ask why."

I think you've been living in my head for a while. I really liked the repitition. I think it added a lot to the poem, and the rhyme scheme was well done.
The message, although gloomy, was a familiar one. I hope all is well *hugs*.
Very nice work.

--Marie

I wish your fingers could touch all I can't say... no one should ever feel this alone.

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