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DragonFang
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0 posted 2002-01-23 01:25 AM


I see you stand on the verge
Where Light and Dark merge
I try to coax you back
But with success I lack
And so into darkness I will go
And with Light I will glow
Until darkness recedes
Healing light I will bleed

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zarina
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1 posted 2002-01-23 04:01 AM


hey, cool, I liked this
mistic
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2 posted 2002-01-23 06:19 PM


this i like, love, but then again you already knew that thank you sweetie
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3 posted 2002-01-24 04:55 PM


SHort and sweet..nicely done..thanks for sharing Dragon

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4 posted 2002-01-27 09:50 PM


you portrayed the line between darkness and light beautifully!

Very well done... I enjoyed this.

--Marie

I wish your fingers could touch all I can't say... no one should ever feel this alone.

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