Teen Poetry #5 |
Shadow and Light (II) |
DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
I see you stand on the verge Where Light and Dark merge I try to coax you back But with success I lack And so into darkness I will go And with Light I will glow Until darkness recedes Healing light I will bleed http://www.heisen.net Peace Through War, it is beginning! |
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zarina Member
since 2001-05-19
Posts 180 |
hey, cool, I liked this |
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mistic Member
since 2001-05-06
Posts 233Idaho, U.S.A. |
this i like, love, but then again you already knew that thank you sweetie |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
SHort and sweet..nicely done..thanks for sharing Dragon yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
you portrayed the line between darkness and light beautifully! Very well done... I enjoyed this. --Marie I wish your fingers could touch all I can't say... no one should ever feel this alone. |
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