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BrokenAngel
Member

since 2002-01-06

Posts 141
Puryear, TN, USA

0 posted 2002-01-21 08:49 PM

I used to stand proud
Strong and tall
Nothing hurt me
I thrived on the pressure of the modern world
Nothing could hold me down
Now I still stand
But I'm hurt
My once obsesion with pressure
Has now broken me down
The pain that I once craved
Is now to much for me

I've been left behind
With shattered wings

---Night Angel

TigerZ
Member

since 2002-01-02

Posts 83
Ontario, Canada

1 posted 2002-01-21 10:26 PM

very nice poem...loved it and i hope that things get better...

A life without love…is no life at all.

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

2 posted 2002-01-22 12:00 PM

I understand how you feel...i really do..::hugs:: i thought u wrote about this feeling well though...great job...keep sharing

yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows

Dark Enchantress
Senior Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 1258
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3 posted 2002-01-22 12:48 PM

The pain that I once craved
Is now to much for me
***************************

I think in some way or another we all crave pain. To test our strength? To become stronger or wiser? Or is it simply because our own demise is fascinating to us? Who knows. We all have our own reasons. Whether you believe it or not... I think you can make it through. Humans are generally much stronger than they know. There's nothing you can't handle. Remember.. like you said... you're still standing. And remember that when you feel like you may fall... there's people standing there not too far away. I'm one of those people.

Thank you very much for posting this. I enjoyed reading it a lot.

Jaime

-- the calm before the storm --

jaimespoetry.blogspot.com

[This message has been edited by Dark Enchantress (01-22-2002 12:50 PM).]

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

4 posted 2002-01-23 03:32 PM

Oh, that ending hurt. That ending hit very hard.

This is beautiful. I'm enjoying your writing, and I hope you continue to share your work.

--Marie

I wish your fingers could touch all I can't say... no one should ever feel this alone.

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