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I Need COURAGE |
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Shygirl82 Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 245Ilinois |
What I really mean to say I love you I want you I need you But when I try to say these things They never come out the right way I chicken out I run away I hide from what I really feel So you never even know What my words are really about I am scared to make a move You are something I really don’t want to lose I can’t wait forever By then you will you be gone My love to you Is something I need to prove I miss my chance day after day I don’t want to ruin what we have But I know I want more How will I find the courage To tell you what I really have to say Some say its already too late We have been “friends” too long But I melt when you hold me And I freeze when you stare in my eyes I smile when my name leaves your lips Maybe we just need a lil help from fate But maybe fate is waiting for me Just to say what I really want To let you know how I feel Because if you need me The way I need you You would be the one To set my heart free Smile!! You never know who may be falling in love with it... |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Aww...i've been in this situation before and its difficult i know. But you have to do whats best for YOU...if you want him then go for him because ya never know what will happen  ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
I know exactly what you are feeling and have found myself in that position. You got to do what you feel is right, in order to respect yourself and calm your mind, go for it. If you guys are tight good friends you should be able to stay that way (that is if things don't become more). Trust yourself and do what is right for you. Good poem by the way, you express yourself really well. Good luck, Jen Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial) |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
I've also been in this situation and it's tough so I hope you can get through it. Lauren "I just needed someone to talk to you were just to busy with yourself."-Staind |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Ahh, a very hard sistuation, indeed. Get the guts to tell him how you feel, girl! I promise... you won't regret it. This is a very well-written poem. You expressed yourself well, and the frustration is evident. GOod luck with this... and I hope to see more from you soon --Marie "It's been a long December, and there's reason to believe that maybe this year will be better than the last." (Counting Crows) |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Oh, wow. I enjoyed that piece imensley. honestly, brutally written. Througholy enjoyed. Again, wow. You hit a button with me. Good luck with this, and with life, and I look forward to seeing more of you and you work. Sincerely, Titus |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
Thats a real bummer.friends who want more have to let it happen, i dont think forcing it would be great. well hope it all works out. Regina |
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prov1717 Member
since 2001-12-26
Posts 74NE |
wow. wow. wow. i feel like someone just wrote about my life, i am in this situation now....i have a good friend and i love him more than anything but i struggle to find the words to tell him and its hard to be honest and tell him that i see him as more than a friend...as we have been just friends for so long. i enjoyed it!!! |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
The best relationships start as friends It's better than dating someone you don't know  though you seem scared, tell him as you said, nothing is gonna happen unless yo do thanks for sharing là où est mon amour? |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Nikki, I've been in your situation before, and I think you've expressed it very well here. Well, the advice most friends gave me was to let him know about it, coz who knows? He might reciprocate your feelings. But then, the fear of losing that friendship forever hangs right over your head like a huge boulder.I guess, you just have to read his actions and decide for yourself if there is a little chance that he might be in love with you. If there is such a chance, then go for it!!  Tell him you love him. But if you don't think so, I'd think it better to be kept a secret, else your friendship might be jeopardised.Well, that's only what I think.  _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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Pixie-Babe03 Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387Central Maine |
i like this one a lot! great work! *Pixie* |
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aaron woodside Member
since 2001-09-26
Posts 256 |
Hey you. I talked to Chelsea tonight and she told me who u are so I was just saying hi. Anyway I'm bored and tired and giddy but since im an insomniac , i'm not sleeping so i'm writing this post,and yadda, yadda. Later ex animo, Aaron There are no great men, only men in great circumstances. |
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