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PoetryIsLife

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since 2001-10-27

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...in my boxers...

0 posted 2002-01-19 01:39 PM

I question myself
   day in and day out
I look to the heavens
   for answers which hide
Peace of the soul is what
   oh what I do long for.

I look back on all my past
   do I see that which breeds regret?
Does my heart fill warm to the brim,
   or does it die cold and misused?

What do we all see
   when we look deep within?
What do we al hear
   when we call to the unseen?

Reach with me for the answers,
   let's see where they take us,
When the unknown becomes knows.

One step forward,
One step closer.

PoetryIsLife

Senior Member

since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

1 posted 2002-01-19 01:41 PM

Hi

*waves*

I know, and honestly admit, this is likely one of my worst in recent memory. But with my life as busy and chaotic as it is, I'm finding it very diffacult to get a groove and keep it. This was just one to at least keep my hand moving. Enjoy if you like. Bye now!

Sincerely,
Titus

Smile, Jesus loves you. :)

xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

2 posted 2002-01-19 03:41 PM

I dont think that this is bad at all Ti..i think u wrote this very well

yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows

Marshalzu

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since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

3 posted 2002-01-19 04:16 PM

Hmm I actually really like this Ti, keep up the good work

Mr Zu

"All things must end, but I can see my fate in your eyes" -Turin Breaks

PoetryIsLife

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since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

4 posted 2002-01-19 04:26 PM

Thanks!

Titus

Smile, Jesus loves you. :)

Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

5 posted 2002-01-19 06:08 PM

Oh wow.  These questions are so hard.

"Peace of the soul is what
   oh what I do long for."

I love those lines... I think those are words that many readers can identify with.
This is so beautifully written, and the style is well done.  I enjoyed it..

If you ever find the answers to these questions, be sure to email me, okay?
Well done, Ti.. beautiful.

--Marie

I wish your fingers could touch all I can't say... no one should ever feel this alone.

Dark Enchantress
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since 1999-07-27

Posts 1258
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6 posted 2002-01-19 08:23 PM

I wrote something very close to this yesterday... at least close in the basics of it. Reflecting and asking questions and trying to move on from there... we should talk soon.

Thanks for posting this, Titus. I really enjoyed it.

Jaime

-- the calm before the storm --

jaimespoetry.blogspot.com

Skyfire

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since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

7 posted 2002-08-18 11:16 PM

"What do we all see
when we look deep within?
What do we al hear
when we call to the unseen?"

I missed this one... I can't believe it... "What do we all see when we look deep within?" Ti, that is the most thought-provoking question I've had in a long time. *smiles* Good read, my bro, good read.

vixengrl04
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since 2001-04-26

Posts 495
East Haddam, CT

8 posted 2002-08-19 01:54 PM

Lots of unanswered questions in this piece, questions that many of us ask ourselves. I didn't think this was bad at all. I quite enjoyed it!

Always,
Nikki

     *~Fighting for your love~*
    *~Is something I cannot do~*
   *~I'm not good enough to win~*
*~And I'm not strong enough to lose~*

PoetryIsLife

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since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

9 posted 2002-08-21 04:48 PM

Thanks you two.

Sincerely,
Titus

"I'll prepare myself, and one day my time will come."
-Abraham Lincoln

[This message has been edited by PoetryIsLife (08-21-2002 04:49 PM).]

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