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What happened to the good times
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What happened to the good times |
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lil_pwheeler Junior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 39here |
If i fell down Would you pick me up If i was thirsty Would you fill my cup I just wanna know If you'll always be there Because I just don't wanna show my feelings If yours just arent there I need you, I want you But is this our path I need the answer But dont know what to ask Are you the right one Two destined together Or are you are you just a wrong In a search for the better Is there really a right Is there really a wrong Or do we just believe They're here, just now gone So for as long we can believe There is somewhere the right one So Well keep on looking Until our quest is come done "I never die, I can never die, but death is *****" "No one dies a virgin, life screws us all" [This message has been edited by lil_pwheeler (01-19-2002 12:21 PM).] |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
 You have expressed yourself well. I like the first stanza especially hehe...Hope you have found the right one!  _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
You asked very good questions in your poem...i liked it a lot and hope to be seeing more from you! yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Great piece I really enjoyed the read "All things must end, but I can see my fate in your eyes" -Turin Breaks |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Very difficult questions... especially when it feels like no one really cares. But hang in there Job very well done. --Marie I wish your fingers could touch all I can't say... no one should ever feel this alone. |
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