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crazymin83 Junior Member
since 2001-09-16
Posts 49Mass |
Sadness My body starts to shake I start to cry But does any one care? I don’t want to be my friend anymore I’m my own worst enemy I will never change As I think of everything Will I make it threw life or will I fail People think I’ll fail But some people believe in me They try making me happy But if they do I cry again When’s it going to stop? I don’t know who my friends are anymore I don’t know who I am anymore I try asking myself Who am I but theirs no answer Can anyone help me? I need a field were I can run I need a person to hold me So I can cry and they can tell me its okay Sadness takes over me Day by day Week by week January 18, 2002 |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
dont let sadness take you over...keep ur chin up i kno you can do this...stay strong yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows |
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Smlie4u87 Junior Member
since 2001-04-28
Posts 16 |
Thats really good. I know just want your feeling. Keep writing, your really good. Tracy |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
I hope you'll get through this phase soon!  Life is like a roller-coaster ride, and it consists of more than all this downs. There are more, if not the same amount of, ups!! Just don't give up on hope  _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Keep you're head up my friend! Ups do follow the downs. Stay strong, and I'm sure you'll make it through. An enjoyable write. Sincerely, Titus Smile, Jesus loves you. :) |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Oh wow... this is powerful. I'm so sorry that you feel this way *hugs* Just stay strong, and keep your head up. Hang in there, Min. --Marie I wish your fingers could touch all I can't say... no one should ever feel this alone. |
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