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Smlie4u87
Junior Member

since 2001-04-28

Posts 16

0 posted 2002-01-18 11:04 PM

Hey, What's up everyone. Sorry I havn't posted in a long time. I've been really busy with my friends and my boyfriend. And I worte this about him, So please tell me what you think about it. Thankz
Always,
Tracy
LOVE
His kiss,
Makes me feel alive.
His eyes,
show me the love in his hreat.
His arms,
holding me as I fall asleep.
'm feeling an overwhelming of hpooness when I'm with him.
Feeling safy in his arms.
When I'm with him all my problems go away.
Everthing in the world, I forget about it.
Everytime I feel his touch.
I'm falling for his love
As he holds me,
He tells me he'll never let me go.
I know that without this kind of love.
I'll never feel alive again.
When I hear his voice,
A smile comes over my face.
When I see him,
Everything around me seems to disapper.
When him and me are together,
we're in our little world.
We forget what other people say.
I never thought I would find a love so true.
For nothing comes close to the love I found.

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

1 posted 2002-01-18 11:07 PM

This was so beautiiful...sounds like an amazing person..never let them go

yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows

Mon Cherie

Senior Member

since 2001-10-31

Posts 922
Land of Never-ending Summers

2 posted 2002-01-19 12:16 PM

The feeling of love (loving and being loved) is just so sweet, isn't it?

Oh, just one more thing, maybe you could try doing a spellcheck before you post?

Some of the words looked just so funny when spelled wrongly.

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

Marshalzu

Member Elite

since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

3 posted 2002-01-19 04:41 PM

Good work, I really found this too be a very good poem (Does that make sense?) hmm anyway... I found the spelling mistakes a little distracting but hey no one is perfect

Andrew

"All things must end, but I can see my fate in your eyes" -Turin Breaks

Baby_Angel123
Member

since 2001-10-12

Posts 63
Unity, ME

4 posted 2002-01-19 07:19 PM

Loved your poem. I can realate to it. Keep up the good work. Look forward toward reading more of your work.

~Heather~

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

5 posted 2002-01-19 07:20 PM

love is, indeed, a wonderful thing. Seems like you found a keeper...

Wonderful work, I enjoyed this.

--Marie

I wish your fingers could touch all I can't say... no one should ever feel this alone.

Devils Angel 666
Member

since 2001-11-30

Posts 71
CT, USA

6 posted 2002-01-20 02:45 PM

I can relate to this alot with. I love the poem. Very good. Expect to see more coming soon to read!
~Dan

Devils Angel 666
Member

since 2001-11-30

Posts 71
CT, USA

7 posted 2002-01-20 02:47 PM

I can relate to this alot with. I love the poem. Very good. Expect to see more coming soon to read!
~Dan

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