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I live in a world
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I live in a world |
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lone_poet707 Member
since 2001-11-17
Posts 70black hole named Aylmer |
I live in a world filled with ideals. I live in a world where nothin is real. I live in a world in which money is everything. I live in a world where our future holds nothing. I live in a world controlled by terror. I live in a world blind to its own errors. I live in a world infested with racism. I live in a world in total schism. I live in a world infected by corruption. I live in a world searching for redemption. |
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TigerZ Member
since 2002-01-02
Posts 83Ontario, Canada |
excellent poem and a perfect description of this world right now in my eyes... A life without love…is no life at all. |
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BrokenAngel Member
since 2002-01-06
Posts 141Puryear, TN, USA |
Beutiful!!! Great way to describe what the world is like now. Keep it up!! ---Night Angel |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
i try and forgot about the thing that are in our world like this...but u cant deny the truth...this was great yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Yeah, our world is all this, and more. Great work!  _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
The words you speak are packed with truth... very well done with this. It's sad, but it really puts everything out there. Well done! I enjoyed this, as always --Marie I wish your fingers could touch all I can't say... no one should ever feel this alone. |
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