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Good-bye Jeffy
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Good-bye Jeffy |
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Lisa_bebe15 Member
since 2001-11-15
Posts 151Florida 
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you say you are sorry but do you mean it? all the other times I have left you back in my life but not this time. Everytime you came back I didnt snap this time I snapped like a twig in a storm I cannot be fixed no matter how many times you say sorry it doesnt make a diffrence nothing will We will never be the same again not friends, not my boyfriend. always and forever you said you left me in the dust and you didnt tell me why where did I go wrong? what did I do to hear those words "I want and need to be single" I ran out on you crying but this time someone else had to comfort me. I will always love you please say this is all a dream I love you.. but do you still love me? "Water Over Matter" |
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Patty o'brien New Member
since 2001-10-07
Posts 4 |
This sounds like my last girlfriend. They say they love you, but you dont know if they mean it. Anyways good poem. The style was dif but strangely it kinda worked.Latter *Pat* |
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zarina Member
since 2001-05-19
Posts 180 |
Know how you feel girl.. It's too bad. But, the poem was overall good. keep on writing  I'm always myslef. Isn't that enough for you? |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
::Hugs::...im sorry this is happening hun...keep ur chin up... "WaNtinG HiM iS HaRd tO 4gEt, LuViN HiM iS HaRd tO rEgReT, LoSiNg HiM iS hArD tO aCcEpT, bUt EvEn WiTh aLL ThE hUrT i'Ve FeLt, LeTtinG Go iS ThE mOsT pAiNfUL YeT, sUmTiMeS u JuSt HaVe tO HoLd uR HeAd Up HiGh, tRy NoT tO cRy, & sAy GoOdByE" yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
It's painful to break up with someone you love, but then if this person doesn't treat you right, he is not worth your loving. Hope you will feel better soon, though. _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
"I cannot be fixed no matter how many times you say sorry" Oh, very tough situation. But you're handling it very well, it seems. It's hard when your heart is broken to turn away. I enjoyed this. Job very well done Look forward to seeing more... --Marie I wish your fingers could touch all I can't say... no one should ever feel this alone. |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Wow. Superbly done. A very emotional piece here. I enjoyed these lines in particular: this time I snapped like a twig in a storm I cannot be fixed As well as the ending. A great write. I hope you're healing well, my friend. Sincerely, Titus Smile, Jesus loves you. :) |
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