Teen Poetry #5 |
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Bleeding Heart |
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HiddenSparklez Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 190British Columbia, Canada |
I’ve got a wounded heart It’s still bleeding as we speak I’d fix it myself but right now I’m too weak I can’t take the arrow out of this part The only one who can help me Is the person who did this to me in the first place The person who started all these games That’s the only one who can help me from bleeding so badly You’d think a simple apology Or a simple sign of affection would be the cure But those are harder to find in somebody who’s not pure So I lay here hoping before I die that, that person would wake up and save me That person knows the kind of condition I’m in Knows that I can break all ties between us If I don’t gain that person’s trust We could lose everything we had just started to begin But when there’s no hope And time is fading quickly Sometimes it’s best to end ties with people who aren’t worthy Sometimes it’s best to leave a misguided soul broken Because then maybe someday They’ll go through exactly what you’ve been through And just maybe they’ll understand you Understand that they were the only one who could fix your bleeding heart "You do what you do, you say what you say, you try to be everything to everyone... come on now, do that stupid dance for me" -Everclear |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
much enjoyed read, thanks for sharing là où est mon amour? |
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BrokenAngel Member
since 2002-01-06
Posts 141Puryear, TN, USA |
Wonderful!! I know how you feel. Tell your mind/brain that it needs to keep up the good work!! ---Night Angel |
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since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
While reading the poem this quote stuck out in my mind "who do you turn to when the only one who can stop you from crying is the exact person who is making you cry" ....I thought this poem was written well..it had emotion in it and its unfortunately a very common occurance in all of our lifes....thanks for sharing yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows |
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Mon Cherie![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Reminds me of a Chinese saying that only the one who tied the knot knows how to untie it. ![]() Thank you for sharing it with us. Much enjoyed! _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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PoetryIsLife![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Wonderful qoute Mon Cherie! I enjoyed the write, and especially the ending. Other then some editing here and there, I think this is a great piece. Keep it up, and good luck. ![]() Sincerely, Titus Smile, Jesus loves you. :) |
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Fading Away![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Wow. Heart break is very hard to deal with you. But with time, it feels better. It stings, and then fades... although you probably feel like it won't. So give it time... and in the meantime, keep writing about it. It helps. ![]() Hanf in there. --Marie I wish your fingers could touch all I can't say... no one should ever feel this alone. |
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china doll Junior Member
since 2002-01-20
Posts 22 |
Well done...I can totally relate.If only he knew what you felt hey? But some people are helpless when we let our emotions become so dependent on them. I like how this poem has very strong emotion expressed with intense words.Hope to hear more! |
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