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Ree Ree
Member

since 2001-06-28

Posts 56
providence, RI

0 posted 2002-01-17 04:07 PM

We're lost now
  aren't we?
Unremembered, uncared for
     unwanted
frozen in the winter's violent chill
Dark summer nights
no longer fill out time
   or our memories
   they go on forgotten as well.

Hackie sack, beaches, dancing in the streets
certainly not for these
   winter storms
  turbulent and unforcasted
no one knows what will
   happen now
  or in the future.
  The future lies
   unknown.

Freezing days
  chilling wind, frozen soul
   will this
  never ending confusion
never end???
  Life not seeming
   worthwhile
          or
   having any purpose
  no leaves one the tress
  no birds in the sky
   empty, cold, unimportant.

We're lost
    forever!??
  No way out
    of this
   cold winter.
  No way to
    find the dark summer nights
        of warm
     assuring
assurance.
  To find the leaves
     so full
and the birds
   happy
  completely content.

All I ever wanted was
   a summer night
of my own
  to share with you
  to last through
    an eternity
  to hold on to
      FOR
    FOREVER....

HiddenSparklez
Member

since 2000-12-29

Posts 190
British Columbia, Canada

1 posted 2002-01-17 06:20 PM

Great poem about the relationship between nature and life. It kinda reminded me about graduation and how I never wanted it to end... Great job tho!

"You do what you do, you say what you say, you try to be everything to everyone... come on now, do that stupid dance for me" -Everclear

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

2 posted 2002-01-18 10:10 AM

I enjoyed this one a lot too!!! Im starting to get attached to your certain kinda format..keep those poems comin!

yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows

Marshalzu

Member Elite

since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

3 posted 2002-01-19 04:37 PM

Wow another long one... I didn't like this as much as the other but it still is very good

Andrew

"All things must end, but I can see my fate in your eyes" -Turin Breaks

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

4 posted 2002-01-19 07:29 PM

Another very stylistic poem. I enjoyed this a lot, Ree Ree. you're a very talented poet.

Remember to reply to other's poems too. That's an important part of PIP

I look forward to seeing more.

--Marie

I wish your fingers could touch all I can't say... no one should ever feel this alone.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2003-01-18 06:28 AM

Ree Ree...have you found what you're looking for? Let me know if you need help.

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