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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden 
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The future is what I make it to be, funny, that I don't feel I could change it now, and maybe I never have been able to. But somehow I wish that I could make you understand, that I could make you come back to me, and maybe someday I will be able to. There's a silence when I sleep, it needs to be filled with the sound of your beating heart near mine. I dream of your arms around me, protecting me for five seconds, so i can forget about shutting out the world. Every day I'm so close to tears and so far away from finding any real answers to my problems. Could you answer my questions? I can't move on until I know if there could ever be an "us" again. I need answers and I don't know where to find them, would you help me with the search? Could you finally give me some answers? horrible, I know, but hey, atleast I try. |
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sean mani Junior Member
since 2001-08-06
Posts 27 |
hmm...it seems funny how people try to search for answers and are still not able to find them. I myself am trying to find answers to get me out of my agony... well written...i am a poet myself..mail me and i will send u some poems i wrote and i am sure u will love em email: my_dark_paranoia@hotmail.com |
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HiddenSparklez Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 190British Columbia, Canada |
No poetry written from the heart is horrible! <- You should remember that for next time ... I thought it described your state very well... and it's common for everybody else... gawd how powerful is the word: answers ? Pretty powerful eh? Maybe cause it's the one thing that everybody wants, but never always gets.  "You do what you do, you say what you say, you try to be everything to everyone... come on now, do that stupid dance for me" -Everclear |
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Alyssa
since 2001-05-30
Posts 385IM ENGAGED!!!!! |
oh sis! this is like a really goodpiece i can almost feel what you are feeling email me if you want good jobTis better to have loved and lost, then to have never loved at all... |
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Pixie-Babe03 Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387Central Maine |
not bad at all! i liked it, seems to be a very common problem, great work *Justine* -=Love starts with a SMILE, grows with a KISS, and ends with a TEAR=- |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
I don't know what to say... Wow... And I hope you find those answers. Melz!! You can't hurt me anymore than I have hurt myself already... |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Its not horrible!! Dont say that...tsk tsk tsk..i understand your problem..but know that you can never change the past..only the future...its in your hands so guide it the way you'd like to see it go yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
It sounds like you may be going through rough times. I'm sorry that things are hard for you. Hang in there. And keep writing about it... it helps. Well done. --Marie I wish your fingers could touch all I can't say... no one should ever feel this alone. |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Thanks all. I'm better now. I've fully let go of all the problems... (Justin).... It's out of my hands now... Don't let your mind wander, it's much to small to be out by itself. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Allysa  maybe he's not the one for you forget Nitsuj you're a great person, someone will love you and this person will make you happier thanks for sharing là où est mon amour? donde está mi amour? wo ist meine Liebe? Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo. [This message has been edited by acire (01-22-2002 05:27 PM).] |
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