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Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

0 posted 2002-01-03 04:26 PM

You called me at midnight
on New Years Eve.
The new year come in
and you want everything
to be okay.
No guilt on your chest,
no little voice in you head.
You wanted to clear it up,
make me the bad guy.
You said to page you
whenever I needed you.
and I sit by the phone,
with the number in my hand.
Whenever I needed you.
Whenever I needed you.
Whenever I needed you
you were never there.

Rant.

Don't let your mind wander, it's much to small to be out by itself.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2002-01-03 10:30 PM

this "rant" my dear, is awesome! The hurt and let down comes through loud and clear....I'm sorry you were hurt....

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

2 posted 2002-01-04 12:13 PM

Wow.. this is powerful! I loved the repition of the "Whenever I needed you". Each time it's read is more powerful than the time before, and the ending drops to almost a whisper to me... I'm sorry you were hurt. No one deserves to be betrayed like that. *hugs*
I enjoyed this, Allysa.

--Marie

"It was a long December, but there's reason to believe that maybe this year will be better than the last." (Counting Crows)

Zukene_Chic
Member

since 2001-09-26

Posts 152
Cali

3 posted 2002-01-04 12:48 PM

*quotes Cake* "Never there. Your never there. Your never ever ever EVER there." Sorry, I couldnt resist. I liked the poem alot. A lot of pain. Hurt. Wow...

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

4 posted 2002-01-04 11:40 AM

I love that song by cake!! "I need ur arms around me..i need to feel your touch.." Nice! Hehe...I loved the poem...i've been in similar situations. Great job and keep postin!

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

5 posted 2002-01-05 02:34 PM

thanks all.

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

6 posted 2002-01-19 11:15 AM

Allysa

I hope this isn't for the same person again
I loved the read, but hope to see some cheerful ones next time
When are you gonna be online again sheesh

haha, thanks for sharing anyways

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.

Mon Cherie

Senior Member

since 2001-10-31

Posts 922
Land of Never-ending Summers

7 posted 2002-01-19 11:32 AM

Wow, it's like all the pent-up frustrations!! Especially near the end "Whenever I needed you You were never there" It is so sad when that is the truth, but better be let down by the truth than be deceived by illusions

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

8 posted 2002-01-22 12:37 PM

Thanks everyone.
It's true, whenever I needed him, he wasn't there.
And it hasn't become a problem of my needing him now,
it seems that he needs me. He needs things w/ me to stay the way they've been so that if his life doesn't work out he can fit like a puzzle piece back into my life.
Well, tough for him, because I'm changing things now.

Don't let your mind wander, it's much to small to be out by itself.

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

9 posted 2002-01-22 05:29 PM

now, that's the spirit
you go girl

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.

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