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The Long Hard War
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The Long Hard War |
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cutiepiesugarbabie Member
since 2002-06-07
Posts 110A Cloud In the Sky |
*this poem was a writing exercise in english class-we were given an object and told to write about it-mine was a wooden carving of a sad looking, hunched over man...this is what i got from it...* The war long over My grandfather's war is not Everyday he hides his head Behind a cloud of shame Guilty Guilty for surviving Guilt Guilt and sorrow o*~Everyone makes mistakes-get over them and make more tomorrow!~*o |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
why would you say your grandfather is ashamed? ashamed to survive? Can you pls explain if you don't mind thanks là où est mon amour? |
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cutiepiesugarbabie Member
since 2002-06-07
Posts 110A Cloud In the Sky |
it's not my grandfather...read the caption at the top... o*~Everyone makes mistakes-get over them and make more tomorrow!~*o |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I thought you related it to your grandfather là où est mon amour? |
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