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Spine Grinder
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since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2002-06-23 05:47 PM


HOW could u do this?
What did I ever do to you?
This is so disgusting,
I want to HURL!
You lied to me so many times,
How could I ever believe you??!?!
I was so STUPID!
If I could go back in time,
I never would have started talking to you!
Thats so FOUL!
I JUST WANT TO SCREAM!
Break something,
hurt something!
MAINLY YOU!
NEVER AGAIN WILL I TRUST YOU!
Just keep away from me!!!!!!!!!!!!

sorry, i'm venting, someone has mad me so mad i want to scream, so if u didnt like it its ok, i just needed to get this out of my system

~U will always remember the people that touch ur heart, but u will never 4get those who break it~

© Copyright 2002 Staci Weidner - All Rights Reserved
cutiepiesugarbabie
Member
since 2002-06-07
Posts 110
A Cloud In the Sky
1 posted 2002-06-24 11:34 AM


i liked to poem
it was so full of emotion
and anger
and just the way it was like 'free writing' very open-a look into your soul
hang in there things are always darkest before the light

o*~Everyone makes mistakes-get over them and make more tomorrow!~*o

Acies
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since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665
Twilight Zone
2 posted 2002-06-25 11:33 AM


it's ok to vent
leaving it inside is never good
go ahead and let it out
but still, learning to forgive is also important
hope you keep that in mind
thanks for sharing

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.


songsoftheaftermath
Member
since 2002-06-19
Posts 84
a world of disarray
3 posted 2002-06-26 03:38 AM


i agree with acire...keeping things in isnt good for the soul...nice vent...i could tell it was a vent without reading you telling us it was (arent i smart? )

could the darkness be my friend?

Punk Angel
Member
since 2001-07-25
Posts 66
Pennsylvania, US
4 posted 2002-06-26 03:48 PM


hey staci....i could guess who this is about, but i already kno who. its ok that ur venting, but i really hope u never take him back, not even as a friend. look at wut all hes dun to u, he dont deserve another chance. well this is a great poem, luv ya gurlie ~kris

We love what is lost, but does what we lost love us back??    
~*Krista*~

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