Teen Poetry #5 |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
HOW could u do this? What did I ever do to you? This is so disgusting, I want to HURL! You lied to me so many times, How could I ever believe you??!?! I was so STUPID! If I could go back in time, I never would have started talking to you! Thats so FOUL! I JUST WANT TO SCREAM! Break something, hurt something! MAINLY YOU! NEVER AGAIN WILL I TRUST YOU! Just keep away from me!!!!!!!!!!!! sorry, i'm venting, someone has mad me so mad i want to scream, so if u didnt like it its ok, i just needed to get this out of my system ~U will always remember the people that touch ur heart, but u will never 4get those who break it~ |
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cutiepiesugarbabie Member
since 2002-06-07
Posts 110A Cloud In the Sky |
i liked to poem it was so full of emotion and anger and just the way it was like 'free writing' very open-a look into your soul hang in there things are always darkest before the light ![]() o*~Everyone makes mistakes-get over them and make more tomorrow!~*o |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
it's ok to vent leaving it inside is never good go ahead and let it out but still, learning to forgive is also important hope you keep that in mind thanks for sharing là où est mon amour? |
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songsoftheaftermath Member
since 2002-06-19
Posts 84a world of disarray |
i agree with acire...keeping things in isnt good for the soul...nice vent...i could tell it was a vent without reading you telling us it was (arent i smart? ![]() could the darkness be my friend? |
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Punk Angel Member
since 2001-07-25
Posts 66Pennsylvania, US |
hey staci....i could guess who this is about, but i already kno who. its ok that ur venting, but i really hope u never take him back, not even as a friend. look at wut all hes dun to u, he dont deserve another chance. well this is a great poem, luv ya gurlie ~kris We love what is lost, but does what we lost love us back?? |
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