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never_a_princess Member
since 2001-06-09
Posts 82Show Me the Money |
I don't want to be The second string of your violin anymore. I have my own instrument now- No strings to be pulled or plucked, Only a song to be sung by me, Always heard, Never repeated. Only my song, And I dedicate it to you, And to all the duplicates you call your people. So, here's to you; May you forever be happy in your Land of Likenesses, Whilst I sing my song, Day in and day out, Reflecting upon the solo that is my life. Friends r angels who lift u 2 ur feet when ur wings have trouble remembering how 2 fly. |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Awsome poem I really like it and I can't wait to read more of your own poems. Lauren "I just needed someone to talk to you were just to busy with yourself."-Staind |
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Lennon2002 Junior Member
since 2002-01-10
Posts 31The wV |
Nice style! Nice post!..... I'll quote all this for me own! muahaha :-P What would you say if I said to you, it's not in what you say, it's in what you do? |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
You have a very interesting style!  Hope to see more from you..._,,,^.^,,,_ |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
I agree and ditto with what everyone else said...keep on sharin! yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows |
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Lennon2002 Junior Member
since 2002-01-10
Posts 31The wV |
come on people, don't pass this one up...you know it's good.  What would you say if I said to you, it's not in what you say, it's in what you do? |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
I loved the metaphor!!!!  I really like what you have here. Like I said, the metaphor was kick-arse, and the message you left me with was wonderful. Very nice work I enjoyed it... hope to see more soon.--Marie I wish your fingers could touch all I can't say... no should ever feel this alone. |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
ahhhhhhhhhhh i can't remember if this is peekers or megs lolz! yes me is a silly duck! hehe :P any ways...... great poem peekers or megz lololololololo!! robin i have a wish but only a certain guy can fufill it! |
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never_a_princess Member
since 2001-06-09
Posts 82Show Me the Money |
This is Anna, Miss Robinz, hun. Friends r angels who lift u 2 ur feet when ur wings have trouble remembering how 2 fly. |
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HiddenSparklez Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 190British Columbia, Canada |
Truly an interesting read... got me reading it twice and thinking about how it's compared to me. I love it when poems do that all on their own. Great job!  "You do what you do, you say what you say, you try to be everything to everyone... come on now, do that stupid dance for me" -Everclear |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
lol i was off! haha sorry annerage! robin i am me don't tell me different!! |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
O0oOoOo...excellent metaphor. I dont think Ive ever read anything quite like this. excellent job. i enjoyed it alot, and the way it all flowed right together. you have a unique style, and those are always welcome here keep posting*dq **You can't always trust the people you want to** |
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Honey Member
since 2001-10-09
Posts 92Hot girl From Canada |
I can really relate to this one. good write It Feels As If I've Always Been Someone On The Outside Looking In. |
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Honey Member
since 2001-10-09
Posts 92Hot girl From Canada |
I can really relate to this one. good write It Feels As If I've Always Been Someone On The Outside Looking In. |
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