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the reign of chaos New Member
since 2002-06-23
Posts 6 |
With it's own darkened grace it slowly reached out it's hand and as a fitted glove of lace it encompassed the twilighted land in it's net of knitted cloth were strewn a thousand lights and as flew high a single moth another silent group took flight The vastness of the universe struck me with a numbing awe and as the moon began to traverse a majestic world i now saw I looked up at the same night sky as i had for many an eve and in my heart i knew i had lied from the place i can never leave. hey, if you could plez tell me what you think of this, that would be great. thanks chaos |
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cutiepiesugarbabie Member
since 2002-06-07
Posts 110A Cloud In the Sky |
Welcome to Passions! (hehe my first time to get to say that) Happy to have such a great poet become a part of Piptalk!! hehe Enjoy!  o*~Everyone makes mistakes-get over them and make more tomorrow!~*o |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
Hey Welcome, I like it! I can't wait to read more chaos! Thanks hun for posting. Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial) |
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songsoftheaftermath Member
since 2002-06-19
Posts 84a world of disarray |
me likes this poem, poet! i think the only thing that threw me off course was the second last line where you wrote "from" it just doesnt go with the rest of the poem. but you did an excellent job with the rest of it. i think you're developing well!   WELCOME! post more soon! could the darkness be my friend? |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
just wanted to get it in the library Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial) |
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