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Baby_Angel123
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since 2001-10-12
Posts 63
Unity, ME

0 posted 2002-06-23 09:03 PM


I wrote this poem when my boyfriend frist found out what I was doing. Then about a week ago we got in a lil disagreement. So I decided to fix this poem up a lil and post it.
Dan if you read this, witch I know you will, I hope you can forgive me, but if you can't I'll understand. But I just want you to know that I love you and always will, even if for some reason should happen to stop.


I was wrong

You asked me to quit,
and I did.

Then about,
two weeks ago,
things started to go down,
and I started again.

You would always,
ask me if,
I was straight,
and I would always,
tell you I was.

Now I'm afraid,
afraid that you'll,
ask yet once again.

For I know,
if you ask,
I can either,
tell you the truth,
or tell you a lie.

I don't wanna lie,
cuz I've never lied,
to you before,
and don't wanna ruin,
the trust that you have,
but I know,
if I tell the truth,
I'll hurt you.

So I decided,
that it wasn't worth it,
that its not worth hurting,
or even possibly losing you.

I just hope,
you don't ask,
but if you do,
I'll tell you the truth,
and hope you can forgive me,
but if you can't,
I'll understand.

For I was wrong,
to start again.


© Copyright 2002 Heather - All Rights Reserved
cutiepiesugarbabie
Member
since 2002-06-07
Posts 110
A Cloud In the Sky
1 posted 2002-06-24 11:31 AM


Wow Takes a great person to admit their problems...good luck!

p.s. You have such a great guy if he stands by u though all ur troubles

o*~Everyone makes mistakes-get over them and make more tomorrow!~*o

Devils Angel 666
Member
since 2001-11-30
Posts 71
CT, USA
2 posted 2002-06-24 01:03 PM


Hey baby
    I love you and always will.  I know things are/were going on in your life and I understand that.  I also do forgive you for starting that back up again.  So long as you twell me the truth I'll always forgive you.  I love you and always will for the rest of our lives together.  I'll talk to you againj real soon and I'll be comeing home soon.  I love you soo much and miss you increduably much!!!  I love you!
~Yours ForEVER!

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Twilight Zone
3 posted 2002-06-25 11:30 AM


Baby,

you know you can always quit again
and this time stay on it
if he truly loves you, he should be able to forgive you
just don't lie to him
thanks for sharing

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.


songsoftheaftermath
Member
since 2002-06-19
Posts 84
a world of disarray
4 posted 2002-06-26 03:35 AM


looks like there's nothing for you to worry about anymore ....
naw i know that somethings are hard to kick out of the system...*counts on fingers* sex, drugs and rock and roll
this is a good write..i could feel the guilt seep through the screen....good write. im glad you realised your mistake...its a GOOD trait that.

could the darkness be my friend?

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