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Baby_Angel123
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since 2001-10-12
Posts 63
Unity, ME

0 posted 2002-06-23 07:06 PM


Because You Cared

If it weren't for you,
I wouldn't be here today.

I'd be gone,
gone to a place,
where only God is.

A place,
full of nothing,
but happiness,
and joy.

A place,
that you kept me from,
because you cared.

[This message has been edited by Baby_Angel123 (06-23-2002 09:18 PM).]

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cutiepiesugarbabie
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since 2002-06-07
Posts 110
A Cloud In the Sky
1 posted 2002-06-24 11:33 AM


ur lucky to have someone there to keeo you from doing something you could never take back-hold onto that person

o*~Everyone makes mistakes-get over them and make more tomorrow!~*o

Devils Angel 666
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since 2001-11-30
Posts 71
CT, USA
2 posted 2002-06-24 12:54 PM


Hey baby!
  Yes I was able to come and check out your poems even though I'm in Idaho right now.  I'm glad that I kept you from possibly doing anything bad to yourself or anything like that you sned you to such a place.  I like your poem and will be coming home to you soon!!  I love you soo much!!!!
~Yours Forever

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Posts 7665
Twilight Zone
3 posted 2002-06-25 11:31 AM


Showing appreciation for someone is always a good thing
I hope you tell him this
thanks for the read

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.


songsoftheaftermath
Member
since 2002-06-19
Posts 84
a world of disarray
4 posted 2002-06-26 03:36 AM


ahh i know someone who's helped me through times like these...

nice write.

could the darkness be my friend?

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