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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl 
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you're doing it tonight- soon know how it's taken handled well... or dropped amongst the tears? you're stepping on some toes... and stirring up the pot unleashing all the demons potential havoc looms ahead. you're doing it tonight- yes that much is certain. you can't take it anymore it's driving you insane the clock is ticking now heading on your way he'll know it soon enough just how much your heart lacks you can roll your eyes no further to thoughts of him forever can't take just one more flower gag reflex much too swift... you're doing it tonight and you just don't care how cutting off the shackles setting yourself free not a current thing for me...but several things (including past experience) kinda put this in my head... It's made to be kinda funny so don't yell at me for being mean hehe  |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
you can roll your eyes no further to thoughts of him forever Hehee.. It's so funny, the thought of having your eyes rolled to the back of your head. Of coz, we know that probably isn't possible...  And it is sometimes good to let go and cut your losses, than to hang on and suffer the pain._,,,^.^,,,_ |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
"cutting off the shackles setting yourself free" I really liked this... I loved the ending. Very positive note. Wonderful work, Jenn.  Keep em coming.--Marie "It was a long December, but there's reason to believe that maybe this year will be better than the last." (Counting Crows) |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Jenn --- who is this for? well, you said it's old.... I'm a little curios on what this is all about though talk to me on MSN or AIM and spill thanks for sharing là où est mon amour? |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
beautiful choice of words in this piece, you really did a great job with this. some of the lines really grab you and hold your attention. keep posting your work. Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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never_a_princess Member
since 2001-06-09
Posts 82Show Me the Money |
"can't take just one more flower gag reflex much too swift..." I liked those lines..I'm thinkin' my gag reflex is way too swift and too often disturbed..through the sappyness of *eRm* people, but who knows..*uMm* Great post! __o0o_Anna_o0o__ *HugZies & WaveZies* Friends r angels who lift u 2 ur feet when ur wings have trouble remembering how 2 fly. |
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Pixie-Babe03 Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387Central Maine |
nice poem! lol this is great! *Justine* |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
I tried to thank everyone individually, but this thing said I had too many characters. Anyway, so yes... I'm glad you all enjoyed. Thanks for replying to my slightly retarded break up poem Jenn "You are the strength, that keeps me walking- you are the hope that keeps me trusting." |
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