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Missthang
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since 2001-07-03

Posts 103

0 posted 2001-07-08 02:45 PM

The Best Vacation Ever

What does it fell like to take a vacation,
to a place so divine without limitations?
But there is one catch to live in paradise,
once you leave you can't think twice.
On the day you say good-bye there is no return,
to the life you once knew and the daily concern.
All your worries will never come back,
for this vacation is one that doesn't lack.
Unpon your departure there is no more pain,
or suffering, or saddness to put to your name.
This vacation is the best that you can take,
forgetting all your problems and giving you a break.
But back on earth you will be missed,
but this journey is one that is to be cherished.
It's sad for loved ones who won't see you again,
mourning and grief is where they begin.
How can a place so heavenly be so sad,
in the eyes of inexperienced this place can make them mad.
Many call the leaving to this place death,
but it's only a permanent vacation which is a great form of wealth.
*In loving memory of my grandma*

knightlyshadows
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 791
obscured vision

1 posted 2001-07-08 03:28 PM

this is a great tribute. and a great poem. i think u did wonderfully on it. cant wait to see more from you. WELCOME TO PASSIONS!

tiff

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

I know Im not perfect but I can smile
& I hope that you c this heart behind my tired eyes

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2001-07-08 03:30 PM

Welcome! Please check your email for a special greeting

~SEA

Heavens Tears

Senior Member

since 2001-03-15

Posts 677

3 posted 2001-07-08 03:35 PM

Welcome to Passions!! This was a wonderful first post. I am guessing the welcoming comittee has not yet arrived in its entirety, but they will. I hope that you like it here at Passions, and look forward to more of your work!

*Amanda*
I need more time to find the real me...
to fly like the birds... to be set free.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-07-09 01:31 AM

Welcome to Passions! I really enjoyed this and found it to be very nicely written.
I hope to see more of you in the future!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Kicking Kim
Member

since 2001-04-16

Posts 426
Cloud Cucko Land!

5 posted 2001-07-09 11:39 AM

Welcome to Passions, this was a very emotional first post I am beginning to like the style of your writing already. Well written! Keep writing - hope you like it here!!

^*~Kicking Kim~*^

"Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression"

Voiceless
Senior Member

since 2001-02-19

Posts 686
Under the stars upon the wind

6 posted 2001-07-09 02:55 PM

Very nice!
welcome!
and yeah!
I can't wait to read more..
So see ya around!

~*Freedom Is Not Free*~ (Korean War Memorial)

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

7 posted 2001-07-11 05:26 PM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!

Glad to see you join our family of friends here in Passions for Poetry. Hope you enjoy sharing and reading as well.

Your first post is very touching. It is full of emotions. Hope to see you post more in the future. Thanks again for sharing

hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare

Starnite
Junior Member

since 2001-07-05

Posts 41
Wisconsin