Teen Poetry #5 |
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you don't love me |
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punkrockerrobin![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV ![]() |
why can't you let me love you? do you have any idea how i feel? we hav so much in common. but you don't love me. i wrote you letters of love. just so you could see what you mean to me. but you don't love me. i'm writing this poem with love. hoping you will know how i feel. your in my mind 24/7. i can't let you go. but i must. because you don't love me. some say i'm foolish. others say it's right. what am i to do? will you love me one day or will i keep dreaming? this poem is to my ex sean who i loved for so long but finally let him go. i have a wish but only a certain guy can fufill it! |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Letting go of someone is hard girl...But one day you would have to do it...And its better to let go as soon as you can...Nice work on the poem!!! ![]() If you want something very badly, set it free. If it comes back to you, its yours forever, if it doesnt, it was never yours to begin with" |
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Jenn Cirrincione![]() ![]()
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Ahhh reminds me of the song "Letting Go" "Don't call me don't write- don't show up in the middle of the night....this is letting go..." *sniff sometimes it can be hard... But you know what, I think you've inspired me here. ![]() Nice poem. Jenn "You are the strength, that keeps me walking- you are the hope that keeps me trusting." |
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Domzi Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 288New York (BK) |
Letting go of someone you love can be hard, but sometimes it's for the best. Nice poem. Poetry is spiritual ventilation! |
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xShUgArHiGhx![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Aww hun ::hugs:: this was very sad but well expressed yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows |
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Mon Cherie![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
It's really true that letting go of someone you love is really difficult. But you're young, and should always look forward. One day, you'll find someone who's going to love you as much as you love him ![]() _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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Skyfire![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
*hugs Robi* Aw, hun! It hurts, doesn't it? But believe me when I say that it WILL get better. Maybe not today, maybe not tomorrow, but evetually it will. Thanks for sharing! I used to be open minded, but all my brains fell out |
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Fading Away![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
((hugs)) Indeed, a very hard situation to have to be put through. Love is so confusing sometimes. I hope things get better... Good luck. --Marie "It was a long December, but there's reason to believe that maybe this year will be better than the last." (Counting Crows) |
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