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layla
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0 posted 2002-01-09 12:46 PM


6 months
and I loved you from the start
there was no other man in my heart
6 months and 1 stupid lie
and u have to let me go, just like that, goodbye
2 weeks and I've been waiting for your call
cause you said that you would
but nothing at all
you said we would discuss things,
maybe you need time, I cant help my patience
all i want is for you to be mine
I know I hurt you
but I can't take this pain
I want you to know
that this was never a game
Yesterday, you said tommorow
and tommorow is today
maybe your'e the one that is playing a game
Maybe your still hurt, maybe you need time
But dont say you will call
and break this heart of mine


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1 posted 2002-01-09 01:44 PM


Aww hun this is a very difficult situation...i hope things work out though ::hugs::

yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows

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2 posted 2002-01-13 05:17 AM


Having a broken heart is the worst feeling...But you shouldnt sit around and wait for this guy...6 months is quite awhile to be with someone...I was with my boyfriend for almost 2 years and we broke up I expected him to call but he never did...Keep your head up hopefully this person will come around!!!

If you want something very badly, set it free. If it comes back to you, its yours forever, if it doesnt, it was never yours to begin with"

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3 posted 2002-01-13 12:13 PM


I really hope you will get through this rough patch soon. Things may or may not work out after that talk, but I hope you can pick yourself up and make your way through life.

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4 posted 2002-01-14 07:54 PM


Losing love isn't fun... and it's a long road back to where you started.  And even then, you're never quite the same.

This is a well-written poem.  *hugs* Good luck.

--Marie

"It was a long December, but there's reason to believe that maybe this year will be better than the last." (Counting Crows)

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