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That Day |
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Lil_Angel123 Junior Member
since 2001-12-16
Posts 13 |
Each and everyday all i think about is you its been so long sice i've seem you last Not seeing you felt like forever That day, when i saw you my eyes spotted you even tho i didnt know my heart told me it was you it was the best feeling unexplainable my heart knew as my eyes thought it was true you were there standing right in front of me you hugged me i didnt want ot let go if i did i dodnt know what would happen now, all i have left are memories of that feeling she talks to you more then me she acts as if shes the one yet you tell me that i am the one and only how can that be? we never see each other you never call me it seems as if you dont care I love you i want you to know that i want to spend the rest of my life with you just like we planned but all i have left is memories wishing i was there with you wishing that you would call me and not her all the time that day was the best day of my life i dream of it hoping that it will happen once again thinking about it makes me cry i have been thinking yet again was that day true? |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Wonderful poem! You really left me wondering wether or not that was a day dream or reality...hmm..great job and you expressed yourself well! yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows |
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~*brittt*~ Member
since 2001-05-09
Posts 76East Haddam, CT |
isnt it funny how youre heart can tell you the answer to questions youre not sure of? i really liked this poem and the one before it and i really hope everything works out! ~britt~ |
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