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Marshalzu  
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking 
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~Distant Voices~ A distant echo Of Spoken word A Quiet Whisper Across the Ocean W h I s P s O f W i N d Carried on white clouds Rise above the mountain pass Through dreary day And freezing night Echoes in the silence -------------------------- To someone very special  Never enter a competition you can't win outright... nobody likes a loser |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
awww. I liked this very much, very soothing. She's lucky  Nice job.Jenn "You are the strength, that keeps me walking- you are the hope that keeps me trusting." |
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Android 17
since 2001-07-21
Posts 664Winnipeg |
*Does Snake chuckle* Nice work! I would've enjoyed this if you continued this longer! *winks* Don't worry---she'll get the message! "If you beleive with your whole heart, you will succeed!" The trick is to know when to walk away---and TO KNOW WHEN TO RUN!!! |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Hey Zu, no deep reply here man, sorry. I enjoyed it. I too woulda enjoyed it being longer, and the ending stumbled me a bit, but again, this was a beautiful read. Very well written mate. Sincerely, Titus The One, The Only... The Titus. |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Aw, man, it's not about me! Geeze! Yes, I am sure I want to reply. It looped me the first time, but the second time I was like, "cool!" and the third time I was like, "aw, that's so sweet! Wish he would email me..." LOL. I too must add my remarks about enjoying much much much more it were longer, but whatever, to each her own, right? I still liked it! That middle line, though. The caps looped me right around! Then I got it. Great write! Rhonda the Great You know you're Canadian when if something's broken, the first thing you ask is if it can be fixed with WD-40 or Duct Tape |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
I agree..this did happen to be a very soothing poem...::sigh::..well done hun! yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
very sweet and relaxing **You can't always trust the people you want to** |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Thank you for all your wonderful replies, it means a lot to me to see so many nice responces. I'm not sure if I could add to this poem without ditracting from it... maybe i'll give it a try and you may see a re-post somewhere . Once again thank you for your replies Never enter a competition you can't win outright... nobody likes a loser |
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