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~*brittt*~
Member

since 2001-05-09

Posts 76
East Haddam, CT

0 posted 2002-01-07 09:35 AM

The way you held me in your arms
Just took my breath away
And i wanted nothing more
Than for us to stay that way.

But your promises were empty
And you meant nothing you said,
But despite all that I loved you
You have no idea how much you meant.

You don't know what it did to me
When you just left me all alone
I bet you didn't think,
That I'd make it on my own.

Well I did - but i still miss you
I never felt that way before,
I foolishly believed,
That we'd stay that way for sure....

gymnast
Member

since 2001-11-18

Posts 80
Scotland.

1 posted 2002-01-07 12:40 PM

This poem is lovely, and whoever the person is obviously doesn't deserve you! Keep hanging on in there! Love to see more of your work!

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

2 posted 2002-01-07 01:18 PM

*sigh* Love lost... that always sucks. And it always hurts a lot at first... everything reminds you of him. But give it time. *hugs*
And keep writing about it... it helps muchos.
well done.

--Marie

"It was a long December, but there's reason to believe that maybe this year will be better than the last." (Counting Crows)

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

3 posted 2002-01-07 04:20 PM

Ahh hun im sorry. Very sad and im sorry to hear this happened but stuff like this happens to the best of us so keep yuor chin up hun

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

DancinQueen

Senior Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA

4 posted 2002-01-09 12:34 PM

ditto on this one

**You can't always trust the people you want to**

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

5 posted 2002-01-13 05:23 AM

Having a broken heart is the worst but maybe your will find someone to help you heal it!!! Im really glad that I read this one...Thanks for sharing!!!

If you want something very badly, set it free. If it comes back to you, its yours forever, if it doesnt, it was never yours to begin with"

Mon Cherie

Senior Member

since 2001-10-31

Posts 922
Land of Never-ending Summers

6 posted 2002-01-13 12:06 PM

It is so sad to have your heart broken by someone you hold so dear. But, I firmly think that if he can treat you so, he's not one to deserve your love. It might hurt very deeply now, but I'm sure time will heal your wounds.

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

TopGunLauren
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 718
California

7 posted 2002-01-13 05:15 PM

It sucks to have your heart broken and I hope everything gets better for you.But anyway nice pome I really liked it.
Lauren

"I just needed someone to talk to you were just to busy with yourself."-Staind

"You've got to get yourself together you got stuck in a moment and y

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