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Are we Still Friends?
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Are we Still Friends? |
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punkrockerrobin 
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV 
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we use to be friends. what happened? we use to be so close. where did we lose each other? is he the one that tore us apart? did i ruin our friendship somehow? tell me please i don't want to loose you. you're like a sister to me. please don't tell me you are gone. you were the one that could keep together. no matter what came my way you were always there. please tell me you are still there. tell me you will still keep me together. are we still friends? love me and rhonda for ti loves us! |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
poeticgirl~ Sorry to hear what you are going through...Ive been there too! I lost my best friend and now its all screwed up...We are growing closer now that me & the guy arent together...But deep down it still hurts to think of whats shes doing...Hopefully she wont let this guy get between the two of you... "If you want something very badly, set it free. If it comes back to you its yours forever, if it doesnt it was never yours to begin with" |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Ohhhhh yesssss... been here before  Had a whole period of writing where it was just about my chica betraying me....taking his side over mine. You know what, we look back now and it's almost like it never happened. we try remembering details and they're fuzzy...we just know we were madder than hell. It's funny really...it was just some underlying tension that came about fully after the guy was screwing around with me. Try to talk it out with her...my friend and I lost months and may never be quite the same... don't let that happen to you girls... nice write robin Jenn "You are the strength, that keeps me walking- you are the hope that keeps me trusting." |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Darling, is this to who I think it is? I'll email you after I get home from school *gag*. You know you're Canadian when if something's broken, the first thing you ask is if it can be fixed with WD-40 or Duct Tape |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
im sorry to hear about what your going through right now but its important to express your feelings and thats what you did and very well i might add.. ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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HiddenSparklez Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 190British Columbia, Canada |
This is a heartbreaker seeing that everyone in this world has at least 1 true best friend who you can pour our soul into and have it returned safely... hope things work out for you and your friend!  "You do what you do, you say what you say, you try to be everything to everyone... come on now, do that stupid dance for me" -Everclear |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Wow, a very enjoyable read Rob, very nice. It sucks this is happening! Ugg... All I can offer is my support. Stay strong, 'ight? God bless.Sincerely, Titus The One, The Only... The Titus. |
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lonely*soul Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 396east haddam (moodus) ct :) |
hey renee, this is such a sincere poem, we've all been there...hopefully ya get through this...a guy is def. not worth loosing a friend over, but im sure if your friends enough youll be still forever... |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
That's a tough situation but you should really give this poem to your friend so she knows how you feel.But anyway it's a beautiful and touching poem and I really liked it. Lauren "I just needed someone to talk to you were just to busy with yourself."-Staind |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
yeah we are still friends they broke up and now i wanna get with him that's why i was mad cus she knew i liked him and wanted to ask him out somewhere to see what would happen but she beat me to it. love me and rhonda for ti loves us! |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Thats kinda suprising that you want to get with him after he was with your friend...Just imagine how she would feel...Thats bogus and all how she got with him when she knew you liked him and all but still I wouldnt do that... [This message has been edited by ERIN (01-09-2002 05:58 PM).] |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
actually me and her talked bout it and we are still friends but he is not in the picture with either of us! i have a wish but only a certain guy can fufill it! |
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Belle19 Junior Member
since 2001-12-17
Posts 19California |
hmmmmmmmmm "If you don't like something, change it. If you can't change it, change the way you think about it" :-) |
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Domzi Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 288New York (BK) |
I hope everything goes well between you and your friend. Keep your head up! Poetry is spiritual ventilation! |
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crazymin83 Junior Member
since 2001-09-16
Posts 49Mass |
Your poem sounds alot like mine. If you go read it you'll understand why. I'm sorry about your friendship, some people we may never understand why they do this to us. ~*~Min~*~ "If you can dream it, then you can believe in your dreams. Crazy D" |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
It is really sad to lose a good friend, even more so when it is a choice between your good friend and the one you love. I hope you'll get through this and come out in one whole piece. _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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