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Yezea, your Angel
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since 2001-06-08
Posts 11
Canada

0 posted 2002-01-06 10:07 PM


Life was hard on me before you
You brought light to my heart
Now you left, darkness is back upon me heart
Life is getting hard on me, after you

I don't know what happen
Maybe time to be free, we needed
Think about each other, did we really cared
Futur without you, what will happen

Im looking back at our past
Love, smile and laughter I see
A strong couple throught hard things they will pass
You see them? It was you and me

What happen to us, can you tell me
I have faith, together again we can be
I cannot stand here anymore, I miss you badly
I beg you to give us a chance sweety

I never stopped to love you
Anything, I will do for you
Takes me back by your warm side
Its so cold, here alone outside

I gave you once my heart and you still have it
Do anything you want with it, but please
Don't break it
I wouldnt be able to survive knowing you through it away



© Copyright 2002 Zeah - All Rights Reserved
knightlyshadows
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since 2001-04-14
Posts 791
obscured vision
1 posted 2002-01-06 11:15 PM


aww this is sad Zea. you wrote it well tho. its kind of wierd seeing Zea and Vielaelyal broken up, i never figured it would happen. but you can still play it hun. *cough* you can rp killin him *cough* that would be interesting to see ;p but anyways.. i think you did well on this. it seems your english is getting better too. you should post more dear. i wanna see more from you. *hugs* see you around Bm hun.
tiff

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

I know Im not perfect but I can smile
& I hope that you c this heart behind my tired eyes

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2 posted 2002-01-07 01:39 AM


This was so sad hun...i can tell you really put your heart into this one..it was oozing with emotion. Wonderful job...you expressed urself great!

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

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