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PoetryIsLife

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since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

0 posted 2002-01-03 05:00 PM

If the evidence leads us to a connection,
let’s ride this wave of such heavenly elation!
If we’re meant to be,
let’s try it out and see!

The feelings of attraction,
can’t be witheld much needed attention.
Our minds in unison,
two stars under the sun… becoming one.

As the party wanders on,
each other our eyes are on.
The rest falls into oblivion,
as meaningful at the moment as the eons.

The language of the eyes,
such elation leads to cries.
Let’s take the chance love,
and see if we’re meant to be!

PoetryIsLife

Senior Member

since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

1 posted 2002-01-03 05:02 PM

Hey

I know this probably isn't one of my best, but I finally got my groove back, and this one came to me. It's probably too cute, but, just enjoy it if you wish.

Later.

Sincerely,
Titus

The One, The Only... The Titus.

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

2 posted 2002-01-03 05:21 PM

Ti's got his groove back!!!! Yay!!! Yeah!! Woohooo!! Too cute, too cute!

You know you're Canadian when if something's broken, the first thing you ask is if it can be fixed with WD-40 or Duct Tape

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

3 posted 2002-01-03 11:56 PM

I enjoyed this poem. I liked the way you began the poem, and you expressed yourself clearly.

I loved the ending stanza, especially:
The language of the eyes,
such elation leads to cries.

Really nice job. I like this muchos! I hope to see more soon

--Marie

"It was a long December, but there's reason to believe that maybe this year will be better than the last." (Counting Crows)

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

4 posted 2002-01-04 07:55 AM

I thought this poem was beautiful! Nicely written..i enjoyed it a lot! Keep em coming

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

gymnast
Member

since 2001-11-18

Posts 80
Scotland.

5 posted 2002-01-04 08:23 AM

This poem is brill! Definatly not too cute! And I totally understand what your saying!!!!! So into my library it goes!! Keep it up!!!!!!!!!!

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

6 posted 2002-01-04 08:27 AM

ti i know it's about me huh lol! i'm just to hot to resist when i walk in a cold room i heat it up! yes i am a dork but gotta love me! gret poem hun i loved it! hehe *dances* yay ti got his groove back! guess what so did i!love ya hun!
robin

love me and rhonda for ti loves us!

PoetryIsLife

Senior Member

since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

7 posted 2002-01-04 04:18 PM

LoL, Much thanks to everyone.

Titus

The One, The Only... The Titus.

Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

8 posted 2002-01-06 07:44 PM

*Claps* Glad to hear you got your groove back..even though thats coming from a complete stranger =p but anyways your title caught my eye..and your words proved the shere magnetism hehehe..it was good..and I can't spell urgh sorry...

Kristen

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