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Ina
Senior Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

0 posted 2002-01-06 04:25 PM

The title of this poem, was borrowed from a song, They LIve In you, (lion King)

As you walk through the corridors
of life, certain doors you refuse to open
while others are the doors of joy
yet those oak doors can lock you out
for when one doesnt forgive, one will
never be able to live again
there are those who love you now
they live inside you , guarding your soul
nudging you along your path
stalling you, when you won't let go
"they live in you"
they are part of you, just like you
are a part of them
the sun will rise tommrow
so will you, so will I
It's hard to love someone
when you still love another
when that love consumes you
leaving no room for someone new
your past is your future and your
future is a new beginning
give someone a chance to prove they love you
that you can love them back
the pain of your past can become
unbearable, so can mine
but I try and return the love
that is sent to me
maye it's time to talk. time to heal?
you never talk to me about anything
you talked more, before you really knew me
I can't read your mind!
do you even still love me?did you ever?
are the questions that remain unanswered
do u continue to sooth me
to protect me from my own death
I don't even know what to say anymore
they say, you don't love me
I say nothing
but the questions that plague me
in the darkest hours of night
I cannot elude....
does he love me like i love him?
does he want us to end?
what is going to happen to him?
To Me?

Regina Levy 2002

For my love...when i cant really say what i want because it doesnt sound right...

gymnast
Member

since 2001-11-18

Posts 80
Scotland.

1 posted 2002-01-06 04:39 PM

I love this poem. It shows all you emotions brilliantly! And I know how you feel coz i often say things wrong, or let the past haunt my future!hope everything works out!Keep up the good work!!!!

knightlyshadows
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 791
obscured vision

2 posted 2002-01-06 11:30 PM

wow regina this was great. really, really great. i know where youre coming from and this poem just really reached out and grabbed me by the throat. i think you wrote it wonderfully. you can feel the emotions bleeding there... dont bleed too long hun *knows she doesnt always make sense to others (like right now prolly), but does to herself gawwsh darn it* ok moving on from me bein odd.. great write hun. this is going into my library. and i hope everything is ok for you. *hugs* great job.
tiff

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

I know Im not perfect but I can smile
& I hope that you c this heart behind my tired eyes

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

3 posted 2002-01-07 01:37 AM

Great job ina!! This had tons of emotion in it!

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

keoni
Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 850
Up in the mountains in the NFC

4 posted 2002-01-08 03:06 PM

Ina,
This was a very good poem. It had alot of good lessons in it that many people should take to heart. Glad I got to read it
Jon

"Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur
"Sometimes it takes a painful loss to realize you are free"- Bouncing Souls

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

5 posted 2002-01-21 05:04 PM

I just love the way you express yourself Ina
You've been doing a marvelous job, so keep it up
thanks for sharing

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
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