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Hallucination
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since 2001-03-18
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0 posted 2002-01-05 07:57 AM


"Just Like You"
© 2002 Brian Eggertsen, All Rights Reserved

I'd give you everything I have
'Cause girl you're all that
But I'm nothing but a fool
Thinking I can get with you
'Cause you're every guys dream
And every girl want to be...

Just Like You, ( Just Like You )
They wanna be on everybodys lips.
Just Like You, ( Just Like You )
They want everyone to go, "wow {edit}".
"Who's that girl", ( Just Like You )
Just Like You....

Now you make my heart go "I Wish"
I dream of a kiss
But every time I see you
I just don't know what to do
'Cause you're every guys dream
And every girl want to be...

Just Like You, ( Just Like You )
They wanna be on everybodys lips.
Just Like You, ( Just Like You )
They want everyone to go, "wow {edit}".
"Who's that girl", ( Just Like You )
Just Like You....


Just Like You, ( Just Like You )
They wanna be on everybodys lips.
Just Like You, ( Just Like You )
They want everyone to go, "wow {edit}".
"Who's that girl", ( Just Like You )
Just Like You....


" {edit} happens, deal with it, and get over it..."

[This message has been edited by SEA (01-05-2002 01:18 PM).]

© Copyright 2002 Brian Eggertsen - All Rights Reserved
LoneWolf
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since 2001-03-10
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1 posted 2002-01-05 06:21 PM


i liked this a lot great job

It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that.
I've learned that even when you th

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2 posted 2002-01-05 10:39 PM


Very nicely done, Hallu... I enjoyed it, as always.

--Marie

"It was a long December, but there's reason to believe that maybe this year will be better than the last." (Counting Crows)

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