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Playing With My Heart
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Playing With My Heart |
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vixengrl04 Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 495East Haddam, CT 
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Hey guys, it's been a little while since I've posted. I've been kinda busy, but I'll try to reply to some stuff today. This poem is about a situation that I'm in right now that seems to keep on getting worse.... "Playing With My Heart" I know that you are with her, and that she means so much to you. But if she's the one who makes you happy, why do you do the things you do? Every time you talk to me, there's all those little things you say. They seem to be hints that show that you and I feel the same way. Every time I see you, I seem to drift toward your direction. And I'm all too ready to reciprocate to every ounce of your affection. Yet each time our encounters end, her name lingers on your lips. You speak of her as if your goal is to see my fragile heart rip. And so I'm lost as to what you're trying to do, When my heart's being pulled in two very different ways. I wish that you could be straightforward with all the twisted words you say. I'm left alone on the sidelines, wondering just where I stand. I hear the sincere things you say, yet I watch you holding her hand. So now comes the time when this game must end, because I refuse to continue to play. You're leaving me led on and hurt, and it cannot go on this way. Do you want me, or do you want to hurt me??? *~Fighting for your love~* |
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gymnast Member
since 2001-11-18
Posts 80Scotland. |
I love this poem! It really shows how you feel. I'm sorry that the guys being such a jerk to you! Hope it all works out! Anyway keep up the good poems!!!  |
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PoetryIsLife 
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
What a dastard, girl. I honestly think you deserve much more then a guy with seemingly no spine or decision making abilities, but love is love. On to the poem, other then some lines that stumbled a bit, for me anyway, I enjoyed the poem, especially the last 1/3 or so. Keep it up. Oh, and good luck.Sincerely, Titus |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
...*Does a double take...* Dude, I so know how you feel...more times than once. And GOD the situation sucks for you, I'm sure. Just say "screw it" to the guy and move on...Yes, even if you just "know he likes you"...Cause if he doesn't like you enough to give you the "title" of girlfriend...Then he is slime and you aren't gonna be looking to hot if you stay with him much longer.Perhaps I should begin taking my own advice now...tehehehe.. I'd done it once before, tis not that hard after awhile...you can do it to. As for the poem, it was very well done. I enjoyed it bunches.you described the situation and the thoughts and feelings you had about it VERY well. Left me with no questions what so ever...Thanks for the read! "I'd rather die purposely alone than to have lived an accidental life of solitude."- Jesa "§ùgã®" Thompson |
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LCsftball16 Junior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 39 |
wow! i can really relate... thanks for sharing! |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
I think MANY people around these parts can relate with what you're saying here. Mind games are not fun, and it's a drag that you're being played with like this. If I were you, I would tell him for the truth. Ask him what he wants! It never hurts to ask, and I know you want to know what the heck is going on. Anywho.. This is well-written! I like the format you used, it worked well. It's good to see you back, and I look forward to seeing more Well done! --Marie "It was a long December, but there's reason to believe that maybe this year will be better than the last." (Counting Crows) |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
What a tough situation to deal with...i dunno how you do it. I think you expressed yourself well with how you feel about this particular situation. It takes a very strong person in my opinion to be subjected to things like that. Keep on writing hun ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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Cinderelly Member
since 2001-12-31
Posts 189NM, USA |
Great poem . . . I can relate, especially to the last line! |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Very tough situation but you let your feelings really show in this poem.But anyway I hope things get better for you and I really like this poem a lot. Lauren "I just needed someone to talk to you were just to busy with yourself."-Staind |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
ugh...men. i know how u feel..im playing this game w/ my ex. except im supposed to act like i dont have feelings for him anymore...and hes trying everything in the book to get me to like him. men do crazy things. but oh well..what doesnt kill us, makes us stronger Take careXXOO-Kiley **You can't always trust the people you want to** |
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~*brittt*~ Member
since 2001-05-09
Posts 76East Haddam, CT |
nikki: hun you know what i think about this whole situation and i prommise that everyhting will work out. i mean, if he says the things you say he does he must still have feelings for you even if it is friendship, but you can build off that cant you? so please dont give up on it ok? everything will be fine. ~love: britt |
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