Teen Poetry #5 |
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A taste of my dreams |
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Kicking Kim Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 426Cloud Cucko Land! |
I am dead, but have not yet sampled the sweetest taste of life. Not yet had, my first emotion crushed. Nor watched my life be wasted or flushed. Not had the power to throw it away, or live to the limit, appreciating everyday. Not had the chance to whisper I love you or find the 8th wonder blooming in my eyes. Not a wish come true or a goodbye to do nor an apology with a smiling glee. I am dead, but not yet sampled a taste of my dreams. "Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression" |
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anonymous albert ?![]()
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
this hit home for me...wow!..i love the way you express this with such images ![]() im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
The imagery was amazing. I do enjoy your work. keep it up. Regina If you only understood my pain then maybe you could learn to be my friend. Be there. My crying shoulder. The smiles. And the caring i need to survive. |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nicely done here. I did enjoy this one Kim! ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Heavens Tears![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
I liked this one Kim. Keep the great poetry rolling! ![]() *Amanda* |
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Fading Away![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Nicely done, Kim! I really liked this, it showed some desperate feelings. All I can say is be patient. Your time will come. You're young, and have lots to do, and lots to see and feel. Your time for love will come ![]() ![]() --Marie You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds. |
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pure_innocence Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 80Colorado, US |
Nice work, I relate and enjoyed. Thanks for sharing, keep up the good work! May Today there be peace within you. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
This is so sad. You will one day be living your dreams. Just wait and be strong for the road towards it is not easy. thanks for the read hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare |
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Low Man's Lyric Member
since 2001-04-03
Posts 236In a dream |
I really felt this one, good job Kim. "Right now I'm having amnesia and deja vu at the same time. I think I've forgotten this before." |
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