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TopGunLauren
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0 posted 2002-01-04 04:14 AM


Get away from me I don't need you,
Why won't you just leave?

I don't like any of you anymore,
So just go away.

You have all screwed me over at some point,
But I have forgiven you.

When I needed you to be here for me you weren't,
So I learned how to be strong for myself.

I can't believe I called you my friends,
Because all you caused me is pain.

But it's a new year now,
And I'm starting my life over.

So I'm not going to take it anymore,
I can do so much better.

In six months we are going to graduate,
And all go our own ways.

So why wait tell then,
To say I'm not going to ever talk to you again.

I'm not going to pretend I like you anymore,
Because I really don't.

Well I really hope you all have great lives,
And if you don't think I will your wrong.

Because you taught me to be strong,
So now I can do anything I set my mind to.

And please don't try to come back to me apologizing,
I don't want to hear it.

Because it's going to be hard for me too,
But all things have to come to an end sometime.

     Lauren

"I just needed someone to talk to you were just to busy with yourself."-Staind


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gymnast
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1 posted 2002-01-04 07:26 AM


I thought this poem was great.  And I've definatly been there with friends in the past.  Unfortuntly I didn't have the courage you show in your poem, but I think I might just have it now!  Keep it up!
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2 posted 2002-01-04 07:49 AM


Aww lauren...hun...i was at the same point in my life as you are right now..except i had those feelings in 10th grade. They're sucky feelings and it feels as though everyone's betrayed you and your all alone..or atleast those r the feelings i experienced. Everything will be ok in the end...if its not ok..then its not the end ::hugs::

P.S.- I love your personal quote by staind...thats an amazing song and so true..

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

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3 posted 2002-01-04 11:58 AM


This is a good out-let of emotions, and a very possitive look on the situation.  New year, new beginning.  I like that.

I enjoyed this, and I look forward to reading more

--Marie

"It was a long December, but there's reason to believe that maybe this year will be better than the last." (Counting Crows)

vixengrl04
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4 posted 2002-01-04 01:49 PM


In this poem, you expressed exactly the way I feel about almost every single person.  PEOPLE SUCK!!  I'm sorry that the ones you thought you could trust hurt you, and I hope that you are able to find people who can really trust...Good luck!!

~*Nikki*~

     *~Fighting for your love~*
    *~Is something I cannot do~*
   *~I'm not good enough to win~*
*~And I'm not strong enough to lose~*

Erin
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5 posted 2002-02-17 05:27 PM


The sad thing about trusting people is that some of the people you trust most arent really your friend...I know what your going through...We all do...Its just a part of growing up...Nice work here!!!

~ShAtTeReD mEmOrIeS,
aRe AlL i HaVe LeFt,
Of YoU aNd Me.~

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