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Zukene_Chic
Member

since 2001-09-26

Posts 152
Cali

0 posted 2002-01-04 01:04 AM

I cant write right now
I cant say what I feel
Or know what I think
Only other poems know
How to word my pain
So what am I to do?
Quote Plath, Dickinson
And the wonderful Poe?
I've been crying at night
So I can get to sleep
And when I wake up
My face looks puffy
When I look in the mirror
Yes, the one with the picture
With you on that one day
Everyone says it's ok
Honestly, I doubt it
We arent in some sit com
Where everything solves itself
What will I do when I...
I cant think, let alone

Write. Wonderful words

I'm a slut. I ruind your life
Just because I'm a slut
And your not the only one in pain
At least you can get high
I cant, though...
Goddess, I cant even write
The words flow through my mind
But my hand only muddles on the
clean white paper with blue dots
Only scribbles of jibberish
Like "tears, hurt" and "pain"
I ruind myself- let alone you
I cant even write
Damn this block.

The last few poems I've posted have been responded to as a sort of "damn that guy" thing, when this one, more than the others, is a "damn me" thing. Just to clarify

gymnast
Member

since 2001-11-18

Posts 80
Scotland.

1 posted 2002-01-04 08:38 AM

This poem is great for showing your emotion. Remeber though-there isn't always just one person to blame-it takes two to tango, to fall in love and to argue. Keep up the good work though-I know what you mean!

lone_poet707
Member

since 2001-11-17

Posts 70
black hole named Aylmer

2 posted 2002-01-04 09:58 AM

this is excellent...im goin thru the same damn thing- blamin myself AND an annoyin writers block!(grr) just remember, if someone makes u feel dat bad, hes prolly worth droppin...
-Joe

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

3 posted 2002-01-04 11:38 AM

You gotta be a little easier on yourself here hun...you've got a lotta anger and its good that express yourself so wonderfully through writing..i enjoy reading your work..it always has so much emotion in it!

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

4 posted 2002-01-04 12:28 PM

Only other poems know
How to word my pain

Aargh, I know how that feels. Don't you just wish sometimes you had a leash for that darn muse? *hugs* Hang in there... it'll come back

--Marie

"It was a long December, but there's reason to believe that maybe this year will be better than the last." (Counting Crows)

Roberta Little
Junior Member

since 2001-12-18

Posts 42
beloit wi usa

5 posted 2002-01-04 01:21 PM

girl i feel like that sometomes to. youre obvously a smart girl so dont let life get you down. hope to see more of your work.

vixengrl04
Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 495
East Haddam, CT

6 posted 2002-01-04 01:27 PM

This was really different, but I liked it. Poetry is such a great way of expressing your emotions, but when you have writers block sometimes it can be really hard to do that. But I liked the way this came out, and it seems like you were really able to vent with this piece.

~*Nikki*~

     *~Fighting for your love~*
    *~Is something I cannot do~*
   *~I'm not good enough to win~*
*~And I'm not strong enough to lose~*

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