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lil_pwheeler
Junior Member

since 2001-07-14

Posts 39
here

0 posted 2002-01-03 01:35 AM

I could really do without the sympathy
I never asked for people to feel sorry for me
I sit here laughing, deep down broken
Sometimes secrets are better left unspoken

People say they knew you, they say you were friends
But really they never cared until your abrupt end
Please cut the fake tears, and sympathetic lies
Truth is you'll forget in short time

You were too young to be taken away
Its not fair, you have to stay
I wont let him take you, its not your time
God where is the sense and rhyme

Everyone will forget pass a week or two
Seems it all really was a lie all the sympathy spued
But I cant forget, I wont forgot, just cant forgot
About you, you and me

"I never die, I can never die, but death is *****"
"No one dies a virgin, life screws us all"

[This message has been edited by lil_pwheeler (01-03-2002 01:49 AM).]

Dark Enchantress
Senior Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 1258
meet Morgana

1 posted 2002-01-03 01:49 AM

Wow, this has to be the best poem I've read all night. Thanks so much for posting this. I really truly enjoyed it. I wish you the best.

The only thing that I fear is to die quietly.

Read between the lines.

jaimespoetry.blogspot.com

TopGunLauren
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 718
California

2 posted 2002-01-03 03:04 AM

This is a very sad poem and also one of the best i've read on here in a long time.I hate when people who morn over the loss of someone when they never really knew the person.But anyway I love this piece and I hope everythign gets better for you soon even though it's going to be hard.
Lauren

"I just needed someone to talk to you were just to busy with yourself."-Staind

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

3 posted 2002-01-03 11:08 PM

This is so sad... a definite tear-jerker. Losing someone like that is a very hard thing for anyone to deal with.

I hope you're okay, and my email's always available for you

I enjoyed the read. I haven't seen you around here in a while, so welcome back, if that's the case

Hang in there.

--Marie

"It was a long December, but there's reason to believe that maybe this year will be better than the last." (Counting Crows)

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