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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Secret desires falling in and out of opportunity And here we go, Would you like to see? Or would you rather have me whisper it in your ear? Somehow I think that you know what it is It’s thick in the air – you can taste it and breathe it in Does it make you hungry? Like a man without water in the hot, dry desert – Do you need it? It consumes me greedily, commanding and demanding for me to follow it’s will So just let me have my way, but just don’t make it too easy I’d take pleasure in conquering you and then licking your wounds 1.3.02 The only thing that I fear is to die quietly. |
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lil_pwheeler Junior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 39here |
Deep and creepy. Just my style Pat |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Glad I'm not the only one. Bwahahahaha.. The only thing that I fear is to die quietly. |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Very deep and I don't know how to feel about it but very interesting piece anyway. Lauren "I just needed someone to talk to you were just to busy with yourself."-Staind |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
LOL @ Jaime... This is a very well-written piece. And, as was said, dark and creepy... but that's your thing. And I love it  I really liked the analogies and imagery you have going on in the poem. I enjoyed this, and I hope to see more soon --Marie "It was a long December, but there's reason to believe that maybe this year will be better than the last." (Counting Crows) |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Deep and creepy indeed. Wow.... I loved this one. I must say, the title drew me in, and you did not dissapoint. Tell me Black Widow... what did you mean by these lines? So just let me have my way, but just don’t make it too easy I’d take pleasure in conquering you and then licking your wounds Casual sex is overated indeed. This line always reminds me of the Rock p the movie taht is... "Or I'd take pleasure in... gutting you..... BOYYYY."  It consumes me greedily, commanding and demanding for me to follow it’s will So true. So true. Another spellbinder My Memina.  Sincerely, Mon Verite My motto... always changing, always improving, living life in veiw of eternity. |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
i don't know about this one hmmmmmm i am me don't tell me different!! |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Well, I didn't see this as dark and creepy..hehe but I'm just being bad aren't I. I loveeeeeeeee this hehe... you're good  lol jenn "You are the strength, that keeps me walking- you are the hope that keeps me trusting." |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
I didn't really think of it as dark and creepy either... just a little naughty. Thanks you guys. "The most beautiful makeup for a woman is passion, but cosmetics are easier to buy." - Yves Saint Laurent Cela passera. turningthepage.blogspot [This message has been edited by Dark Enchantress (03-20-2002 08:03 PM).] |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
"Does it make you hungry? Like a man without water in the hot, dry desert – Do you need it?" Oooooooooooooooooo!!....someone's getting *ahem*horny*cough.. ..im loving these latest pieces from you jaime...post more now! MORE! NOW!...its an order My england is goodly- are you strudable? |
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