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Lisa_bebe15 Member
since 2001-11-15
Posts 151Florida 
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I told you something that no one else knows, but you and I. I should have told someone sooner but I was to scared that I would go away and never see my family again. It wasnt my fault, that I choose not to tell anyone I trust you and knew you would understand. I never knew something this painful would be ever spoken I can't put into words how I feel about this but I did You asked me why I cry and I cannot lie to you anymore now you know why I know my secret is safe with you because I love you. "Water Over Matter" |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
It is always easy to trust the one you love, and it is always a good thing to share your feelings. I would have like the poem to have more of a set up and scheme to it. But it was nice all the same. Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial) |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I hope you are ok...I can't know what it is you are being secretive about, but if you are being hurt, you need to tell someone who can help you. ( I am a worrier, it's what I do)  This is a very emotional write...good job  "...and she swears there's nothing wrong |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Susan, you're a mom, so it's your job to be a worrier  I liked this one a lot, Lisa. You touched on some heavy issues, and, to avoid being redundent, listen to SEA. I look foward to seeing more --Marie "It was a long December, but there's reason to believe that maybe this year will be better than the last." (Counting Crows) [This message has been edited by Fading Away (01-03-2002 06:29 PM).] |
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