Teen Poetry #5 |
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Grateful |
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Zombie Man Member
since 1999-06-22
Posts 52Va |
Come with me my love, Take my hand and don't look back. Focus now, on what waits for us ahead. In time I hope to show you, What you mean to me. The things you have done for me, The things you do for me, And the things you will do for me, All things that I'm grateful for having you. In my dark times, you should me the light. I never know how may I repay you, For everytime you have saved me from pain. I never know if you weren't here, What would my life be. I'm just so grateful for having you. Now I stand here, Taller and stronger then before. My heart and my mind, Have changed while next to your side. Now, my soul has true love inside. You are heaven sent, That one angel who claims my heart. I don't know why I have you here, But I will nver throw that away. I'm just so grateful for having you. |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
I like how you set up your stanzas. Love is a great thing... Good job! Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial) |
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Lisa_bebe15 Member
since 2001-11-15
Posts 151Florida |
I love that..aww..keep up the good work! "Water Over Matter" |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
very very sweet, I like this! ![]() "...and she swears there's nothing wrong |
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since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Wow... beautiful work! Very sewet poem. I enjoyed this. Well done! --Marie "It was a long December, but there's reason to believe that maybe this year will be better than the last." (Counting Crows) |
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