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Cinderelly
Member

since 2001-12-31

Posts 189
NM, USA

0 posted 2001-12-31 01:15 AM

An actress living a lie,
a princess without a prince,
a dreamer waking to reality,
a fairytale waiting to be . . .

Simply put, the me I don't want to be.

C?
Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 190

1 posted 2001-12-31 01:19 AM

hey hey!! I thoroughly enjoyed it! I like poetry that twists cliches, very nice!

Voiceless
Senior Member

since 2001-02-19

Posts 686
Under the stars upon the wind

2 posted 2001-12-31 04:15 PM

well first off,
Welcome!
yes i so was the first to say it!
I can't believe it!
YES!
Okay anyway, i loved it short
with a powerful message.
Flow is good,
setup is awesome.
Nicely done!
And I can't wait to read more!
So see ya around!
~jen

Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial)

Ina
Senior Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

3 posted 2001-12-31 06:00 PM

this was very good, short but good.
keep on writing.
welcome to passions! hope u coninue to share your work with us

Regina

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

4 posted 2001-12-31 10:02 PM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!

Great write here! It was short, but sometimes short poems are the best. Love it!

You know you're Canadian when if something's broken, the first thing you ask is if it can be fixed with WD-40 or Duct Tape

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

5 posted 2002-01-01 09:29 PM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!!!

Wow...great first post...short and sweet and sums up so much at the same time! I cant wait to read more from you hopefully in the near future

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

[This message has been edited by xShUgArHiGhx (01-01-2002 09:33 PM).]

Melster
Member

since 2000-12-09

Posts 442
Brisbane, Qld, Australia

6 posted 2002-01-01 09:44 PM

WONDERFUL!!!

Looking for More!!

Melster!!

P.S.

WELCOME!!

TopGunLauren
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 718
California

7 posted 2002-01-02 03:10 AM

Short but nice I liked it.
Lauren

"I just needed someone to talk to you were just to busy with yourself."-Staind

Marshalzu

Member Elite

since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

8 posted 2002-01-02 05:33 PM

Welcome to passions, I loved your first post short and sweet. I hope to see more of your work in the furture

Andrew

The silence is more beautiful than you will ever know
Don't touch anything, Don't let this moment go -Seafood

PoetryIsLife

Senior Member

since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

9 posted 2002-01-02 06:36 PM

OH WOW! I loved it. What a wonderful piece!

Fantastic. Again, I loved it. Very poignant, and deep. Great write! Oh, and welcome. You'll love it here.

Titus

The One, The Only... The Titus.

prov1717
Member

since 2001-12-26

Posts 74
NE

10 posted 2002-01-02 07:50 PM

short and sweet, nice job, i look forward to more

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

11 posted 2002-01-03 06:15 PM

Welcome to Passions in Poetry!

I really liked this. Very short, but powerful. I loved the optimistic tone in the last line. I thought this was one of those poems telling about your life... this is what you are. But that last line completely impressed me. It shows your maturity through words. Very nicely put. I enjoyed this. Keep posting all your work, but don't forget to reply too. Posting is a two-way-street.

I look forward to reading more.
And again, welcome!

--Marie

"It was a long December, but there's reason to believe that maybe this year will be better than the last." (Counting Crows)

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