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fozzyozzy Member
since 2001-03-15
Posts 336Lessburg Virginia 
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The Broadway He has two skips that play along with him on a bustling street corner Excited to see the show, they never stop the best seats could be taken and he will never be one of those without ----------------------------- I know this is short, but it just seems complete somehow or another. What do ya'll think? "and Death i think is no paranthesis"-e.e. cummings |
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C? Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 190 |
I like yer style short and sweet, definately complete. |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
I am always a fan of the short stuff! So this is right up my style! I liked it. Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial) |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
i think this was complete, it was very good. i like short poems, although i have never had much sucess with them. Regina |
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chasing rain Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 737Canada |
My, my Sean...you certainly know how to make a big impact in such a short poem, ne? ^_^ I love it! It's so cute and fuzzy! Ok, fuzzy is putting it a bit much. But it's true...the best seats are taken by those who are performing. ^^ "Excited to see the show, they never stop" ...I hope they never stop... Again, great work here, Seany! ^_^ Keep it up! I'm keeping this. ^_^ ++ Leah ++ Va pensiero sull' ali dorate... [This message has been edited by chasing rain (12-31-2001 11:36 PM).] |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Short and sweet and very complete  ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
I do miss your poetry, Sean. I love the power packed into such few lines. Very nice work! I also liked the format of this poem. As usual, your format is unusual, creative, and worked well. The indention of the 2-4 lines is well-placed. Nicely done, as usual. I hope I see you around here more. I enjoyed this --Marie "It was a long December, and there's reason to believe that maybe this year will be better than the last." (Counting Crows) |
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