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prov1717 Member
since 2001-12-26
Posts 74NE |
i want to wake up with things the way they were why can't they be the same why is there this fear a constant uncertainty of life and who i am too terrified to live afraid i'll make the wrong choice again my only thought is "this cannot be happening" i want to go back to the way it was when i could dream there was a time when i could be anything i wanted to be my mind went to places you've never seen there was a time when i didn't want to hurt you but i've grown into someone i said i'd never be can that be true my heart won't stop racing my mind can't stand still i'll wait until i wake up then the pain will leave this isn't real, its just a dream the way i am now its not happening |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
You express yourself real well. Great job. Keep smiling things get better trust me i have been there.  Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial) |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
I really enjoyed this poem , Very sad though. keep on writing and happy new year. Regina |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Wow.. a very emotional piece and straight to the point. Very heavy emotions you're portraying. It sounds like you're going through a trying time... *hugs* Very well done. I enjoyed this, as always, prov  --Marie "It was a long December, and there's reason to believe that maybe this year will be better than the last." (Counting Crows) [This message has been edited by Fading Away (01-03-2002 11:46 AM).] |
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