Teen Poetry #5 |
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I Breath |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind ![]() |
Yesterday has faded, Tommorrow doesn't have a shadow, Today I breath. ~Flower lasts so an hour, yet spring will brings her back to life again. |
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C? Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 190 |
Ah! If only everyone had your outlook! Nothin beats today....nothin! I liked it a lot! |
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DarkAngelOfTheStars Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 255 |
wow that was short but very deep I loved it. Its a nice way to look at how to live. live for today not tomorrow or yesterday ![]() Don't make me get my flying monkeys :P |
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branden726![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
So short but so long it seems the meaning is longer then the poem itself i loved it. |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Your poem has a lot of meaning for being such a short poem I like it. Lauren "I just needed someone to talk to you were just to busy with yourself."-Staind |
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prov1717 Member
since 2001-12-26
Posts 74NE |
beautiful. short. sweet. so true. |
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PoetryIsLife![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Short and sweet.... I enjoyed it. ![]() Titus |
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Fading Away![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
I loved this, Eliza... Very calming words you wrote. "Today, I breathe". You're taking one day at a time. That's the only right way to do it... ![]() --Marie "It was a long December, but there's reason to believe that maybe this year will be better than the last." (Counting Crows) |
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chasing rain Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 737Canada |
I founds this very optomistic (spell check, anyone?)! I suppose the "shadow" would be the things that gloom over us, the heavy stuff...the e-e-e-evil stuff. *nods* ^_^ Very nice. Thanks for sharing! ++ Leah ++ Va pensiero sull' ali dorate... |
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Zukene_Chic Member
since 2001-09-26
Posts 152Cali |
Breathing is a wonderful thing. I loved this very much. |
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