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Essence of Bliss
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Essence of Bliss |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada 
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Hey everyone... The swirling sensation of pleasure mixed with the essense of bliss an orgy of senses are awakened by trailing lips and fingers delicate, soft caresses burn the skin a feeling of immense relaxtion takes over golden hazel eyes are spiced with life strength and softness melt the body like caramel let go, lost control there's a special movement I see at the base of your throat baboom, baboom rapid breath bodies tangle in the sheets eyes open in the essense of our bliss... Regina Levy some things in life are not meant to be, while others are meant to be cherished |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Ooo very interesting, Regi. I love the way you encorporated a sound into this. The wording is great (as per usual) and I can't find a thing to pick at in this piece. It's great to see you posting again. Take care of yourself.  ~AF~ If this is all the world has to offer, I want a refund on my life. |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
I like this one a lot.. very descriptive and sensual. Thanks for posting this.  The only thing that I fear is to die quietly. |
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prov1717 Member
since 2001-12-26
Posts 74NE |
nice job, you write very well and are very descriptive in your poems....i look forward to more. les |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
REGI!!! Wow, it's great to read your work again... I've missed you, girl... This is an awesome piece, as always. Emotions are running deep, and you words hit hard. Very nice work. post more soon... --Marie "It was a long December, and there's reason to believe that maybe this year will be better than the last." (Counting Crows) |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
simply beautiful Ina I never thought you had it in you sounds of contentment and pleasure keep em coming thanks for sharing là où est mon amour? |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Well written Ina!!! I liked it a lot and thanks for sharing!!! yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Regina, I think I like your style! I read your "Letters to the soul". I think it is special coz you use a variety of words to describe your topic (here it's bliss), and it really gives one a complete picture of what you're talking about. I like the way you relate bliss to caramel... It's juz sweet, isn't it?_,,,^.^,,,_ |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
"bodies tangle in the sheets eyes open in the essense of our bliss..." Well said, Ina ^_^...I liked the protrayal of this one. From the emotions of senuality to deepness of words. "Dont piss me off. Im runing out of places to hide the bodies." [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (02-06-2002 02:18 AM).] |
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