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Ina
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0 posted 2001-12-29 02:10 PM


Hey everyone...


The swirling sensation of pleasure
mixed with the essense of bliss
an orgy of senses are awakened
by trailing lips and fingers
delicate, soft caresses
burn the skin
a feeling of immense relaxtion
takes over
golden hazel eyes
are spiced with life
strength and softness
melt the body like caramel
let go, lost control
there's a special movement
I see at the base of your throat
baboom, baboom
rapid breath
bodies tangle in the sheets
eyes open in the
essense of our bliss...

Regina Levy

some things in life are not meant to be, while others are meant to be cherished

© Copyright 2001 Regina Levy - All Rights Reserved
anonymousfemale
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1 posted 2001-12-29 09:44 PM


Ooo very interesting, Regi. I love the way you encorporated a sound into this. The wording is great (as per usual) and I can't find a thing to pick at in this piece.

It's great to see you posting again. Take care of yourself.

~AF~

If this is all the world has to offer, I want a refund on my life.

Dark Enchantress
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2 posted 2001-12-30 12:18 PM


I like this one a lot.. very descriptive and sensual. Thanks for posting this.

The only thing that I fear is to die quietly.

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prov1717
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3 posted 2001-12-30 04:18 PM


nice job, you write very well and are very descriptive in your poems....i look forward to more.
les

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4 posted 2002-01-03 11:10 AM


REGI!!!  Wow, it's great to read your work again... I've missed you, girl...

This is an awesome piece, as always.  Emotions are running deep, and you words hit hard.  Very nice work.  post more soon...

--Marie

"It was a long December, and there's reason to believe that maybe this year will be better than the last." (Counting Crows)

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5 posted 2002-01-11 05:13 PM


simply beautiful Ina
I never thought you had it in you
sounds of contentment and pleasure
keep em coming
thanks for sharing

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.


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6 posted 2002-01-12 01:52 AM


Well written Ina!!! I liked it a lot and thanks for sharing!!!

yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows

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7 posted 2002-01-12 12:45 PM


Regina, I think I like your style! I read your "Letters to the soul". I think it is special coz you use a variety of words to describe your topic (here it's bliss), and it really gives one a complete picture of what you're talking about.

I like the way you relate bliss to caramel... It's juz sweet, isn't it?

_,,,^.^,,,_
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8 posted 2002-02-06 01:27 AM


"bodies tangle in the sheets
eyes open in the
essense of our bliss..."

Well said, Ina ^_^...I liked the protrayal of this one.

From the emotions of senuality to deepness of words.


"Dont piss me off. Im runing out of places to hide the bodies."

[This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (02-06-2002 02:18 AM).]

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