Teen Poetry #5 |
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A Somewhat Illustrative Collaberation with Chasing Rain: Singing Lessons |
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-Myriad- New Member
since 2001-11-24
Posts 6Canada |
Her hands dance upon the ivory keys Her eyes were closed, within a dream And like a tune of autumn breeze She sighed a sigh of perfection. A watching eye did listen well To every note that played aloud A clicking nose that soon did swell To something much more stunning. The music played a stunning piece Of winter chill, and summer sun That caused the clicking to increase To volumes much too loud. The watching eye could not contain Its wish to join the song that played And with its beak, the piano feigned As shrills of noise came forth... To see the illustration, go to: http://elfwood.lysator.liu.se/loth/l/e/leahwong/bird.jpg.html We hope you enjoy it as much as we had doing this. *smiles* -Myriad- and ++ Leah ++ Infinitum. Va pensiero sull' ali dorate... |
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zarina Member
since 2001-05-19
Posts 180 |
I love this.. ![]() I'm always myslef. Isn't that enough for you? |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I loved this. And i loved the picture. I displayed my liking towards it in a comment. Anyhow, well done here Myriad and Leah. Beautiful! ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Child of the Stars![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
OOoooohhh pretty, you two. I love that birdie ![]() ~Carly Speak softly and carry a beagle. |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
very nice work you two, you did a really beautiful job with this piece. Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Myriad & Leah- This is excellent! You two write VERY well together. ![]() I really enjoyed this. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Fading Away![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
This is absolutely beatiful! But... *sniff* *sniff* ![]() *ahem* The rhyme scheme through this piece is amazing, and the images portrayed are excellent... you two are very talented writers, and I believe it shows. Wonderful work! --Marie If there's one thing I've learned, it's that the most frustrated people in the world are those who know they're stupid, but keep trying anyway. [This message has been edited by Fading Away (12-27-2001 10:37 PM).] |
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since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Beatifully written guys!! ::Applauds:: ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Wow, absolutely brilliant. The picture is great, the poem is great, the whole damn set up is great! ![]() I do like the way you've brought a picture in with the piece. Good thinking you two. ![]() Thanks for the read. I hope you guys considering doing more things like this in the future. ![]() ~AF~ If this is all the world has to offer, I want a refund on my life. |
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punkrockerrobin![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
i liked this poem a lot! great work! robin repeat after me: punk is the best music ever created! |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
I adored every word!! this is sooo going in my library *actually glad she's taking the time to read some poems* really cheering me up..especially this one.. Kristen |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
such beautiful words, almost like singing ![]() thanks for the awesome read là où est mon amour? |
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anonymous albert ?![]()
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
One Word: Beautifullytalented. ^_^ "Dont piss me off. Im runing out of places to hide the bodies." |
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