Teen Poetry #5 |
This poem is for everyone..even though I don't know you |
Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
Hey guys I know I don't get on much..and I don't reply but it's my new years resolution to try to get the library more often and read your words..they've helped me..and I really feel them..I have this really weird thing with me and empathy or just call me psycho..but I hope you all read this and hopefully makes you smile..=)I know it sucks to have noone understand or always feel like you're alone..you might even push everyone away..but there is always someone out there who loves you and will be there for you..and it just might be that mere stranger you never know who is an angel in disguise ok I'm weird so bite me..lol jk:P I read your words I feel your pain Isn't it funny That I don't even know your names We've never met in the waking realm But perhaps in our treasured dreams I wish I could ease the pains you feel And erase the growing pains Because I've been there And still am walking through this life Sometimes confused by the choices I have to make I could actually turn blue in the face And tell you everything is going to be okay But noone can sugar coat the truth For whatever happens is meant to be Even if it throws us down into a spiral of pain and misery It makes us wiser, makes us stronger But yet I grieve for the ones who give in I know, I've thought about throwing the towel in I've been abused, I've been hurt And my soul has been challenged many times before But please don't give up Don't give in Or you'll never see what's waiting behind the next door... |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
I know exactly what you mean, this place means a lot to me. Obviously you see the heart around here too. Thanks for showing us! Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial) |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
I know how you feel. Great write! Don't let your mind wander, it's much to small to be out by itself. |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
hello, this was a very good piece. Keep on writing for us. i wish u a healthy and happy new year. |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Indeed, isn't it funny? This was a nice poem. Thanks for posting it.. even though you don't really know us. The only thing that I fear is to die quietly. |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Yeah really nice poem I liked it keep up the awsome work. Lauren "I just needed someone to talk to you were just to busy with yourself."-Staind |
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fozzyozzy Member
since 2001-03-15
Posts 336Lessburg Virginia |
Thank you for the delightful poem. Chances are, you don't know me, but hey that doesn't matter much on the net does it? "and Death i think is no paranthesis"-e.e. cummings |
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dastard Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 55in tearing silence |
good write, I liked it... and good luck on your New Year's reslution "Pain doesn't hurt when it's all you've ever felt" ~Marie, the girl of a thousand truths |
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aaron woodside Member
since 2001-09-26
Posts 256 |
A simple thanx is all I can give to you. (I don't talk to strangers ) I know what you mean about that empathy thing though. I have it too. Wish I could give it back. Great write. see ya around. ex animo, Aaron There are no great men, only men in great circumstances. |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
I too know how you feel and i think its very sweet of you to write a poem to all of us the way you did I appreciate it...thanks hun ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
It's always amazed me how a group of people could grow so close, but never meet... Very sweet poem, and a wonderful new year resolution... I hope you are successful... it would be wonderful to see you a part of the forums again I enjoyed this, as always. --Marie "It was a long December, and there's reason to believe that maybe this year will be better than the last." (Counting Crows) |
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Alyssa
since 2001-05-30
Posts 385IM ENGAGED!!!!! |
Very nice ....Handle with care... |
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