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Ceinwyn
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0 posted 2001-12-29 02:00 PM


Hey guys I know I don't get on much..and I don't reply but it's my new years resolution to try to get the library more often and read your words..they've helped me..and I really feel them..I have this really weird thing with me and empathy or just call me psycho..but I hope you all read this and hopefully makes you smile..=)I know it sucks to have noone understand or always feel like you're alone..you might even push everyone away..but there is always someone out there who loves you and will be there for you..and it just might be that mere stranger you never know who is an angel in disguise ok I'm weird so bite me..lol jk:P


I read your words
I feel your pain
Isn't it funny
That I don't even know your names
We've never met in the waking realm
But perhaps in our treasured dreams
I wish I could ease the pains you feel
And erase the growing pains
Because I've been there
And still am walking through this life
Sometimes confused by the choices I have to make
I could actually turn blue in the face
And tell you everything is going to be okay
But noone can sugar coat the truth
For whatever happens is meant to be
Even if it throws us down into a spiral of pain and misery
It makes us wiser, makes us stronger
But yet I grieve for the ones who give in
I know, I've thought about throwing the towel in
I've been abused, I've been hurt
And my soul has been challenged many times before
But please don't give up
Don't give in
Or you'll never see what's waiting behind the next door...


© Copyright 2001 Kristen Brandon - All Rights Reserved
Voiceless
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since 2001-02-19
Posts 686
Under the stars upon the wind
1 posted 2001-12-29 03:23 PM


I know exactly what you mean,
this place means a lot to me.
Obviously you see the heart
around here too.
Thanks for showing us!

Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial)

Allysa
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In an upside-down garden
2 posted 2001-12-29 03:48 PM


I know how you feel.
Great write!

Don't let your mind wander, it's much to small to be out by itself.

Ina
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada
3 posted 2001-12-30 12:06 PM


hello,
this was a very good piece. Keep on writing for us.


i wish u a healthy and happy new year.

Dark Enchantress
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since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258
meet Morgana
4 posted 2001-12-30 12:33 PM


Indeed, isn't it funny?

This was a nice poem. Thanks for posting it.. even though you don't really know us.

The only thing that I fear is to die quietly.

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TopGunLauren
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since 2000-08-02
Posts 718
California
5 posted 2001-12-30 08:48 PM


Yeah really nice poem I liked it keep up the awsome work.
  Lauren

"I just needed someone to talk to you were just to busy with yourself."-Staind


fozzyozzy
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since 2001-03-15
Posts 336
Lessburg Virginia
6 posted 2001-12-31 01:00 AM


Thank you for the delightful poem.  
Chances are, you don't know me, but hey that doesn't matter much on the net does it?

"and Death i think is no paranthesis"-e.e. cummings

dastard
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since 2001-07-14
Posts 55
in tearing silence
7 posted 2001-12-31 03:00 PM


good write, I liked it...
and good luck on your New Year's reslution

"Pain doesn't hurt when it's all you've ever felt" ~Marie, the girl of a thousand truths  

aaron woodside
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since 2001-09-26
Posts 256

8 posted 2002-01-01 06:51 AM


A simple thanx is all I can give to you.  (I don't talk to strangers )   I know what you mean about that empathy thing though.  I have it too.  Wish I could give it back.  Great write.  see ya around.

ex animo,
   Aaron

There are no great men, only men in great circumstances.

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tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs
9 posted 2002-01-01 09:12 PM


I too know how you feel and i think its very sweet of you to write a poem to all of us the way you did I appreciate it...thanks hun

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

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10 posted 2002-01-03 11:52 AM


It's always amazed me how a group of people could grow so close, but never meet...

Very sweet poem, and a wonderful new year resolution... I hope you are successful... it would be wonderful to see you a part of the forums again

I enjoyed this, as always.

--Marie

"It was a long December, and there's reason to believe that maybe this year will be better than the last." (Counting Crows)

Alyssa
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IM ENGAGED!!!!!
11 posted 2002-01-03 09:12 PM


Very nice

....Handle with care...

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