Teen Poetry #5 |
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Regrets |
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Zukene_Chic Member
since 2001-09-26
Posts 152Cali ![]() |
I regret not having said that I was sorry And how much it hurt to know that I've caused All of the pain you've had of late I regret having said "lets do" And damning you to a hell much greater than mine own Where you'll rot for the eternity we call life I regret having been myself and doing so Been the one who got off the hook And leaving you to the pit filled with lions But most of all I regret not getting to tell you sorry And however much I love you Which has made me regret most of all... I regret having loved you, and loivng you still |
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Zukene_Chic Member
since 2001-09-26
Posts 152Cali |
I meant to say "Loving" in that last line.. not loiving |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
don't worry i didn't even notice the loivng thing i didn't even notice it until you mentioned it. I just can't spell so I over look that kind of stuff out of habit. When it comes to the poem, the feelings that you get across show your regret and guilt. You did that quite well when it comes to getting your point across. I am more of a flow girl though and that didn't have as much as i would like. But you did great with that style when it came to expression. Good job. And by the way I know what you mean... Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial) |
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xShUgArHiGhx![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
I feel this way sometimes too...but i think the wise thing to do is to not regret the things you've done..but the things that you have not... ![]() ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Sounds like you regret al lot and it sucks but you will get through it.Very nice poem keep up the work. Lauren "I just needed someone to talk to you were just to busy with yourself."-Staind |
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Fading Away![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
This is a powerful poem, Trinity. Very well-expressed. There is a note-pad overtop of your post where you can edit your post if you have a typo ![]() I enjoyed this piece, and I look forward to seeing more ![]() --Marie "It's been a long December, and there's reason to believe that maybe this year will be better than the last." (Counting Crows) |
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prov1717 Member
since 2001-12-26
Posts 74NE |
i agree....its powerful. dont' let the regrets you have bring you down, all you can do is learn and live better. keep it coming, i want to read more ![]() |
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